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There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

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Vancouver is having an epidemic with heroin addicts committing crimes for their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” is made to prevent addicts and better the lives of them. The issue is the large crime rate due to the rise in addiction. Addicts tend to struggle more dealing with day to day life. Any sort of social interaction that is small or little can be hard to keep when dealing with addiction. Heroin addicts will take serious measures in order to maintain that drug for themselves. The most common crimes dealing with staling as well as breaking and entering. There is nothing holding them back from reserving the drug again to use once more. The issue with the program is how won’t make addicts stop using heroin, instead they are preventing the city from a further crime rate. By assisting in giving the drug, they are able to make sure that there will be a prevention in crime rate. This will as well make sure users are out of hospitals as well. It is unfair that hospitals have to deal with users that don’t care about their bodies and prefer to use dirty needles on themselves, to never end up affording their tremendous hospital bill. This is so that heroin addicts can get their fix in the safest way possible. This will cure the city but not further assist the constant problems that heroin causes.