Rebuttal REWRITE – Snowman

Cars Powered by Solar Energy

Solar-powered cars have been recognized as a response to fuel worry in electric cars (EVs), along with sustainability concerns. On the other hand, some contest about their viability. begin to examine why, in spite of these reservations, the solar-powered cars have future potential.

The idea of using solar energy to decrease the fear of range in battery-powered car is addressed in Sarah Wells’ article “Where Are All the Solar-Powered Cars?” In “The Reality of Solar-Powered Cars,” Kevin Clemens lists difficulties but also suggests possible fixes. Also, the growing trend of EV owners installing solar rooftops is addressed in “Solar rooftops gain traction as electric vehicle owners look to skip paying for electricity or fuel: ‘Solar just makes sense'” by Alexa St. John and the Associated Press.

Participants argue that infrastructure and solar technology aren’t yet developed enough for widespread use. They point to lack of facilities for charging and cars with limited solar panel surface area. But according to Clemens, continued developments in solar technology could soon make solar-powered vehicles a reality. In addition, the increasing number of solar rooftops among drivers of electric cars suggests that solar energy will grow increasingly a favorite.

In conclusion, there are challenges to get past but there are no denying the potential benefits of solar-powered vehicles. Solar-powered cars, which provide a more efficient and environmentally friendly alternate to traditional vehicles, have a chance to play an important part in sustainable transportation as technology develops and demand rises.

References

Clemens, K. (2023, October 31). The reality of Solar-Powered cars. Tech Insights. https://eepower.com/tech-insights/the-reality-of-solar-powered-cars/#

Wells, S. (2023, October 11). Where are all the Solar-Powered cars? Ieeespectrum. https://spectrum.ieee.org/amp/solar-powered-cars-2665858715

Solar rooftops gain traction as electric vehicles owners look to skip paying for electricity or gasoline: ‘Solar just makes sense.’ (2023, December 16). Fortune. https://fortune.com/2023/12/16/solar-rooftops-gain-electric-vehicles-owners-skip-paying-for-electricity-gasoline/#

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4 Responses to Rebuttal REWRITE – Snowman

  1. Snowman10's avatar Snowman10 says:

    I have try my best to get the way your feedback advice me thank you. i request you to give me a feedback again.

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    • davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

      The discrepancy between the language you use in Replies like these and the fluency you display in your essays is impossible to miss, Snowman. I hope it helps explain why I have such trouble judging how much of what you present as your own work is actually your own work.

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  2. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    The writing here is eloquent in the same way your other arguments are eloquent: they say very little, but they say it nicely. They invariably adopt a middle position, balancing between favor and disfavor for any idea, very much the way artificial intelligence models balance their answers to controversial questions. This one tests at 70% likely AI-generated, but I don’t really need analysis to hear the signs.

    The sources you name are terrific popular media examinations of the very topic you’re selected. They happen to contain wonderful relevant information, none of which finds its way into your Rebuttal argument. I like the research. I like your concentration on a clear point of view, that being, “Regarding the Solar Car, it’s just not likely to happen!” What I don’t like is the sense that I’m being baited and switched. You could convince me that your work is legitimate quite easily, by incorporating the sources you name in your References section with pertinent citations in your argument. Until then, . . .

    Provisionally graded.

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  3. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    I appreciate the paragraph stuffed with references and citations, Snowman. It demonstrates your willingness to follow feedback and begin the process of drafts and revisions we should have started many weeks ago. I’m finally beginning to get a handle on your writing abilities and challenges.

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