reflective– CasperTheGhost

GOAL 1: I used a multi-stage, recursive, and social process for my writing and took into consideration feedback from my instructor, classmates, and other readers.

I took and implemented feedback many time with my writing this semester. I used this feedback to not only rewrite my posts, but also to reconsider and enhance the ideas I put into those posts. Professor feedback was very helpful towards the end of the semester with some of the final essays. I was able to get many good ideas and points to argue that I feel really enhanced my research position.  Also, classmate feedback helped a lot.  With the assignment “help that hurts”, I was able to improve my style of writing, organization, grammar and other things.  I feel I was very open to feedback and criticism in my writing.   Mainly in my Definition rewrite essay, where my original essay was quite weak, I was able to make a much stronger essay with the help of feedback.

GOAL 2: I read source materials closely and analyzed them critically to learn how and why texts create meaning.

I paid very close attention to the material found in my sources.  I used multiple sources to get a better understanding of the background of the subject I was writing about. This allowed me to get as much information of the subject from multiple sources that I could.  I then found, read and analyzed multiple sources that had biased writing.  I read sources from both prospectives, for and against euthanasia.  This allowed me to gain a stronger sense of what opposing arguments were being made, and also a way to refute them. I also used different sources to strengthen the points I was making in support of my claims. I did this strongly in my Research Position Essay

GOAL 3: I wrote with a particular audience in mind, allowing my purpose to shape the language and methods I used not just to communicate information but to persuade readers.

The particular audience I had in mind while writing was the professor and the rest of the class reading the blog. This cause my writing style and language to be a bit more on the informative side.  Knowing that most everyone in the class were writing on a different subject, I had to put more background information into my essays.  I felt It was necessary to establish a base to my writing, making sure to put in background information and basic details about the subject before I started to make my claims. The way I made my claims, were to introduce them, explain their relevance to the topic, then use sources to support them. I exemplify this in my Definition rewrite

GOAL 4: I demonstrated my information literacy by synthesizing my own experience with new insights and information from a range of outside sources to produce new material.

Before I started my research, the only claims I had were of my own thinking.  I made claims that I thought made sense and supported my position.  With further research, I was able to develop stronger claims that I could support with evidence, as well as support my original claims with the help of research.  With just my own thoughts, I wasn’t able to make a strong convincing argument. But with the help of research and feedback, I was able to make a much stronger, persuasive argument. I show this in my Causal Rewrite

GOAL 5: My writing is ethical. Writing about meaningful topics, I have engaged responsibly with them and represented my ideas and the ideas of others honestly, fairly, and logically.

I feel my writing was very ethical.  I made honest claims and gave evidence that the claim was logical.  I didn’t make outrageous argument that were there to make my view look right and bash the opposite view. I also feel that my topic was very meaningful.  Euthanasia is a very important topic world wide.  I represented my ideas fairly honestly and logically. I properly sighted and gave credit to the ideas of other that I used to make my arguments.  My strongest case of this is my Research Position

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1 Response to reflective– CasperTheGhost

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    Casper, this assignment is an argument like every other assignment, and like all arguments, it benefits tremendously from specific claims, details, examples, illustrations. Or it would if you used them. Read this and see if anything comes to life before your eyes:

    Professor feedback was very helpful towards the end of the semester with some of the final essays. I was able to get many good ideas and points to argue that I feel really enhanced my research position. Also, classmate feedback helped a lot. With the assignment “help that hurts”, I was able to improve my style of writing, organization, grammar and other things.

    Anything?

    You did link to your Definition essay as part of your response to Goal 1, but your reader will go there without much of a clue about what to look for.

    If you need this grade as a tie-breaker, you’ll want it to be persuasive like any good essay. Link your sections to the posts that best demonstrate that you’ve met the goals. Prep your reader to find specific evidence at the end of that link.

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