Get rid of those that can go.
Most of them can go.
One popular way to complicate a simple expression is to add unnamed people and place them into a confusing and unnecessary cause/effect situation. Readers can be misled into thinking the identities of the players in these dramas are important. In addition, the characters introduce gender and number problems where they don’t belong.
Here’s the simple sentence that does not require an if/then or any anonymous actors:
Teenage drivers are being ticketed for speeding proportionally more often than other drivers.
The Hard Way:
If the driver looks as if he or she might be a teenager, then he or she is more likely to be pulled over and given a ticket for speeding by an officer who thinks he or she might be a youthful driver.
In addition to unnecessarily complicating our simple idea, this sentence is also massively overpopulated with at least one female teenage driver and one male, plus an opinionated officer.
A Valid Objection:
You may say that the new sentence introduces a fresh and useful piece of information about the prejudice of certain traffic officers, and I agree. But the solution is not to place everybody into if/then mayhem.
Instead, if you want to feature the drivers:
Easy way #1:
Teenage drivers are ticketed for speeding by opinionated traffic officers proportionally more often than other drivers.
Easy way #2:
Teenage drivers are victimized by opinionated traffic officers who give them proportionally more speeding tickets than they give other drivers.
Or, if you think the focus of your sentence now features the traffic officers:
Easy way #3:
Opinionated traffic officers ticket teenage drivers for speeding far more often than they do other drivers.
EXAMPLES FROM REAL LIFE
1. Problem: My writing was based on who my audience was and what kind of paper I was writing for. For instance, if my writing was for an editorial, then of course personality was not implemented into its tone. However, if I was writing a Letter to the Editor then tone is instrumental when it comes to establishing my point; it becomes necessary.
- Correction: I used a personal tone for appropriate audiences. For instance, I kept my personality out of my editorial writing, but used it to establish tone in my Letter to the Editor.
2. Problem: Creating and shaping ideas are great ways to add uniqueness and purpose to one’s writing, but that’s only the case if his or her writing is inherently good.
- Correction: Good writers create and shape unique ideas.
3. Problem: I learned it was much easier to keep my purpose known throughout my writing, as well as the reasoning behind it. Even if it was not necessarily what I agreed with personally, I realized it was vital for my attitude on the paper to be one the audience can familiarize with.
- Correction: I learned to defend even positions I personally reject by using clear and obvious reasoning throughout my writing.
THE EXERCISE
Rephrase each of the numbered sentences below to eliminate the unnecessary if/then constructions and the needless cast of characters. As above, the solution to the problem is often to name the category of person who acts out the behavior:
- youthful drivers instead of drivers who look as if they might be teenagers, or
- prejudiced officers instead of cops who think that teenagers are more likely to violate the law.
- Do your work in the Reply field below this post.
- Number your sentences to match the examples.
- If you do two versions to feature different agents, use 1A and 1B, for example.
- Finish the exercise before the end of class.
- You may depart for Spring Break when I have reviewed your work.
THE SENTENCES
- It’s almost guaranteed that if we continue disregarding our pollution and effects on Global Warming, we’ll see storms like Sandy more than once a year.
- If they had realized that the infrastructure of the levees, before Katrina, was outdated, maybe then the city’s people could have prevented such devastation.
- The Park Ranger should have been allowed to take the semi-automatic weapon away from Mr. Embody if he felt that the citizens in the park were in danger.
- The most important idea to consider is the safety of all citizens, and in the case of Leonard Embody, the safety of those in the park that day could have been in jeopardy if it were not for the park ranger, Steve Ward, who smartly and correctly detained him.
- As people of character we know to do the right thing even if no one is watching.
- If students learn ethical behavior now, then further down the road if they face an ethical dilemma, even if the opportunity of making a dishonest decision presents itself, maybe they’ll think twice about taking that risk.
- They clearly did not understand what Harvard was trying to teach them, if they needed to resort to such conduct in order to overcome this obstacle.
- The Stock Exchange needed to be open for morale, even if trading was limited and slow, and it needed to be open for the Street, “to show that it was there,” Silverblatt explained.
- If the parents of a man or woman haven’t voted in their lifetimes, then their child is not as likely to vote than they would be if he or she had been brought up in a household where the parents always vote.
- Portugal will not legalize all drugs but will decriminalize them, which for the most part means that if a citizen is caught with illicit drugs, then they will not be incarcerated.
- If a person consumes a caloric surplus of 500 calories per day, they are going to gain weight regardless of the type of food they’re eating, even if it is “clean.”
- If someone is satisfied with one’s life, then they are less likely to help others in need.
- If one were looking at the islanders of Yap, one could see a much simpler version of how the entire world operates today.
- Rape is when any unwanted sexual act is forced upon a person. If the sexual act is not consensual, then that is considered rape.
- Rape is when one of the participants can not or does not give consent. A party can not give consent if they are not of the proper age or under the influence or alcohol or drugs.
1. Disregarding pollution effects Global Warming, frequent devastating storms each year are guaranteed.
1B. Disregarding pollution effects Global Warming, frequent devastating storms will follow.
2. The un-checked, consequently outdated levee infrastructure before Katrina allowed for devastation.
3. Considering the danger emanating from Mr. Embody’s weapon, confiscation would be justified.
4. Most importantly, consider Park Ranger Ward, who detained Embody upholding the safety of nearby citizens.
5. As people of character we do the right thing when no one is watching.
6. Students learning ethical behavior now, may further down the road of dilemmas, think twice about dishonest decisions.
7. Overcoming this obstacle by different means is what Harvard was attempting to teach them.
8. Silverblatt explained that “to show that it was there”, the Stock Exchange must unwaveringly remain open for the Street.
9. Children of non-voting parents are less likely to vote than those of voting parents.
10. While not legalizing all drugs, decriminalizing them saves Portuguese users from incarceration.
11. Consuming a surplus 500 clean calories per day will cause weight gain.
12. Someone satisfied with life is less likely to help others in need.
13. Looking upon the islanders of Yap, a much simpler version of the modern world is seen.
14. Rape is any unwanted sexual act forced upon a person.
15. Participants who do not give consent, or can not due to substance influence or improper age are victims of rape.
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THE SENTENCES
It’s almost guaranteed that continuation of disregarding our pollution and effects on Global Warming, will result in more storms like Sandy more than once a year.
Realizing that the infrastructure of the levees, before Katrina, was outdated, could have prevented such devastation.
The Park Ranger should have been allowed to take the semi-automatic weapon away from Mr. Embody since he felt that the citizens in the park were in danger.
The most important idea to consider is the safety of all citizens, and in the case of Leonard Embody, the safety of those in the park that day could have been in jeopardy but the park ranger, Steve Ward, smartly and correctly detained him.
As people of character we know to do the right thing even if no one is watching.
Teaching students ethical behavior now, will help further down the road if they face an ethical dilemma, even if the opportunity of making a dishonest decision presents itself, maybe they’ll think twice about taking that risk.
They clearly did not understand what Harvard was trying to teach them, if they needed to resort to such conduct in order to overcome this obstacle.
The Stock Exchange needed to be open for morale, even if trading was limited and slow, and it needed to be open for the Street, “to show that it was there,” Silverblatt explained.
If the parents of a man or woman haven’t voted in their lifetimes, then their child is not as likely to vote than they would be had he or she had been brought up in a household where the parents always vote.
Portugal will not legalize all drugs but will decriminalize them, which for the most part means that a citizen caught with illicit drugs will not be incarcerated.
Consuming 500 calories per day, will lead to gaining weight regardless of the type of food they’re eating, even if it is “clean.”
If someone is satisfied with one’s life, then they are less likely to help others in need.
If one were looking at the islanders of Yap, one could see a much simpler version of how the entire world operates today.
Rape is when any unwanted sexual act is forced upon a person. If the sexual act is not consensual, then that is considered rape.
Rape is when one of the participants can not or does not give consent. A party can not give consent if they are not of the proper age or under the influence or alcohol or drugs.
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It’s almost guaranteed that continuing to disregard our pollution and effects on Global Warming, storms like Sandy will occur more than once a year.
Realizing before Katrina that the infrastructure of the levees were outdated, maybe the city’s people could have prevented such devastation.
The Park Ranger should have been allowed to take the semi-automatic weapon away from Mr. Embody when he felt that the citizens in the park were in danger.
The most important idea to consider is the safety of all citizens, and in the case of Leonard Embody, the safety of those in the park that day could have been in jeopardy without park ranger, Steve Ward, who smartly and correctly detained him.
As people of character we know to do the right thing even when no one is watching.
Students learn ethical behavior now, then further down the road when facing an ethical dilemma, the opportunity of making a dishonest decision may present itself, maybe they’ll think twice about taking that risk.
They clearly did not understand what Harvard was trying to teach them, because they needed to resort to such conduct in order to overcome this obstacle.
The Stock Exchange needed to be open for morale, even though trading was limited and slow, and it needed to be open for the Street, “to show that it was there,” Silverblatt explained.
When the parents of a man or woman do not vote in their lifetimes, their child is not as likely to vote than they would be if he or she had been brought up in a household where the parents always vote.
Portugal will not legalize all drugs but will decriminalize them, which for the most part means that a citizen caught with illicit drugs, will not be incarcerated.
A person consuming a caloric surplus of 500 calories per day, they are going to gain weight regardless of the type of food they’re eating, even if it is “clean.”
People who are satisfied with their life, are less likely to help others in need.
Someone looking at the islanders of Yap, could see a much simpler version of how the entire world operates today.
Rape is any unwanted sexual act is forced upon a person. When the sexual act is not consensual, it is considered rape.
Rape can be defined when one of the participants can not or does not give consent. A party can not give consent when they are not of the proper age or under the influence or alcohol or drugs.
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By ignoring our pollution and effects on Global Warming we increase the chance of having a storm like Sandy more than once a year.
Keeping up to date with the levees would have prevented much of the devastation from Hurricane Katrina.
Park Rangers should be able to confiscate semi-automatic weapons that may threaten the lives of guests at the park.
The most important thing to consider, which is the safety of all of the citizens in the park, was in jeopardy while Leonard Embody was walking around with his semi-automatic weapon until properly detained by park ranger Steve Ward.
People of character know to do the right thing even while no one is watching.
Teaching students ethical behavior early on will help them down the road when an ethical dilemma or dishonest-opportunity presents itself by making them think twice before taking such risks.
Those who needed to resort to dishonesty and cheating clearly could not understand what Harvard was trying to teach them, after all.
The Stock Exchange needed to be open for morale, despite trading being limited and slow, and it needed to be open for the Street, “to show that it was there,” Silverblatt explained.
Parents who regularly vote in their lifetime raise children who are more likely to vote than those who have been raised by parents who have never voted.
Portugal will not legalize all drugs but will decriminalize them, meaning a citizen caught with drugs will no longer be incarcerated, but more likely be fined.
Even while eating “clean” foods, a calorific surplus of 500 calories of more will cause a person to gain wait no matter what.
Those who are satisfied with their own life are less likely to help another who is in need.
The economic and social behavior of those on the island of Yap is a simplified model of how the entire world is today.
Rape is when any unwanted, non-consensual, sexual act is forced upon a person.
Rape is when one of the participants can not or does not give consent. A party not of the proper age or under the influence or alcohol or drugs cannot give consent.
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1. Continuing disregard for our pollution and effects on Global Warming, storms like Sandy are guaranteed.
2. Realization that the infrastructure of the levees, before Katrina, was outdated would have prevented the city’s devastation.
3. Mr. Embody’s weapon could have caused danger to the citizens so the Park Ranger should have been allowed to take the semi-automatic weapon away.
4.The most important idea to consider is the safety of all citizens, and in the case of Leonard Embody, the safety of those in the park that day could have been in jeopardy but the park ranger, Steve Ward, smartly and correctly detained him.
5. People of character do the right thing when no one is watching
6.They clearly did not understand what Harvard was trying to teach them since they needed to resort to such conduct in order to overcome this obstacle.
7. The Stock Exchange needed to be open for morale, though trading was limited and slow, and it needed to be open for the Street, “to show that it was there,” Silverblatt explained.
8.There are parents of a man or woman who haven’t voted in their lifetimes, their child isn’t as likely to vote.
9.Portugal will not legalize all drugs but will decriminalize them, which for the most part means that citizens that are caught with illicit drugs will not be incarcerated.
10. While not legalizing all drugs, decriminalizing them saves Portuguese users from incarceration.
11. Consuming a surplus 500 clean calories per day will cause weight gain.
12. Someone satisfied with life is less likely to help others in need.
13. Looking upon the islanders of Yap, a much simpler version of the modern world is seen.
14. Rape is any unwanted sexual act forced upon a person.
15. Participants who do not give consent, or can not due to substance influence or improper age are victims of rape.
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1. Disregarding pollution and global warning will almost guarantee a raise in storms like Sandy.
2. With updated infrastructure of the levees, the damage caused by Katrina could have been limited.
3. The confiscation of the weapon was justified by the danger it brought to the people in the park
4. The safety of others in the park could have been in jeopardy if it wasn’t for Ranger Wards actions.
5. As people of character, we know to do the right thing even when people arent watching.
6. Teaching ethical behavior now can lead to the right choice being made further down the road.
7. Overcoming this obstacle by different means is what Harvard was attempting to teach them.
8. For morale, the stock market needed to remain open when trading was slow, to show that it was still there.
9. The child of parents who vote is more likely to vote then with parents who didn’t vote.
10. Decriminalizing drugs saves Portuguese users from incarceration.
11. Consuming a caloric surplus of 500 calories will always result in gained weight.
12.When a person isn’t satisfied with their own life, they are less likely to help others.
13. Studying the people of yap can result in a simpler view of how the modern world operates
14. Rape is any unwanted sexual act forced upon a person.
15. Rape occurs when one party either doesn’t give consent or can’t due to intoxication.
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1. Devastating storms will happen more often as long as people disregard Global warming.
2. Damage from storms like Katrina can be avoided by paying more intention to the reliability of the infrastructure of the city.
3. The citizen’s safety should allow the park ranger to confiscate any weapon that compromises that.
4. Considering the citizen’s safety, the park ranger was right to detain Leonard Embody when he put them all in danger.
5. What we do when no one is watching defines our character.
6. Early ethical learning is important for students when a dishonest decision presents itself.
7. Resorting to inappropriate conduct to overcome an obstacle displays the students did not understand what Harvard taught them.
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1. Disregarding our pollution and effects on Global Warming, will guarantee to have more storms like Sandy more than once a year.
2. Realizing that the infrastructure of the levees, before Katrina, was outdated, the city’s people could have prevented such devastation.
3. The Park Ranger felt that the citizens in the park were in danger and should have been allowed to take the semi-automatic weapon away from Mr. Embody.
4. The park ranger, Steve Ward, who smartly and correctly detained Leonard Embody to consider the safety of all citizens.
5. As people of character we know to do the right thing even though no one is watching.
6. Students learning ethical behavior now can face ethical dilemma, down the road, and make a dishonest decision presents it, making them think twice about taking that risk.
7. They clearly did not understand what Harvard was trying to teach them, when they resorted to such conduct in order to overcome this obstacle.
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1. It’s almost guaranteed that disregarding our pollution and effects on Global Warming will cause storms like Sandy more than once a year.
2. Realizing the outdated infrastructure before Katrina could have prevented such devastation.
3. Feeling that the citizens in the park were in danger, the Park Ranger should have been allowed to take the semi-automatic weapon away from Mr. Embody.
4. The Park Ranger, Steve Ward, detained Leonard Embody because the safety of the citizens in the park was the most important.
5. When no one is watching, people of character still know to do the right thing.
6. Students learning ethical behavior now will make them think twice about taking the risk of making a dishonest decision when faced with an ethical dilemma further down the road.
7. Resorting to such conduct in order to overcome this obstacle showed the lack of understanding in what Harvard was trying to teach them.
8. Silverblatt explained that when trading was limited and slow the Stock Exchange needed to be open for morale and for the street, “to show that it was still there.”
9. The parents of a child having voted or not has an effect on whether or not the child will or will not vote later in life.
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1. It’s almost guaranteed by continuing to disregard our pollution and effects on Global Warming, storms like Sandy more than once a year.
2. By realizing the infrastructure of the levees, before Katrina was outdated, maybe the city’s people could have prevented such devastation.
3. The Park Ranger should be allowed to take the semi-automatic weapon away from Mr. Embody; he felt that the citizens in the park were in danger.
4. The most important idea to consider is the safety of all citizens. In the case of Leonard Embody, the safety of those in the park could have been in jeopardy if the park ranger, Steve Ward, smartly and correctly detained him.
5. As people of character we know to do the right thing, whether people are watching or not.
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1. By ignoring the effects of pollution and global warming, the public is sure to see more major weather systems like Hurricane Sandy.
2. The realization that the levees were outdated came too late for the victims of Hurricane Katrina.
3. The park visitors were endangered by the inability of the Park Rangers to take the semi-automatic weapon away from Mr. Embody.
4. The quick thinking of Park Ranger, Steve Ward, secured the safety of the park’s visitors by detaining Leonard Embody.
5. A person of character can do the right thing without recognition.
6. Students who learn ethical behavior now are more likely to resist the temptation of a dishonest decision.
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THE SENTENCES
1. It’s almost guaranteed we will continue to see storms like Sandy by disregarding our pollution and effects on Global Warming.
2. Devastation could have been prevented if they had realized that the infrastructure of the levees, before Katrina, was outdated.
3. The Park Ranger should have been allowed to take the semi-automatic weapon away from Mr. Embody if he felt that the citizens in the park were in danger.
4. Park Ranger, Steve Ward smartly and correctly detained Leonard Embody and protected all citizens.
5. As people of character we know to do the right thing even if no one is watching.
6. Students learning ethical behavior now, may think twice about dishonest decisions further down the road.
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1. Continued disregard of pollution effects on Global Warming will yield storms like Sandy more than once a year.
2. Much of the devastation from Katrina could have been prevented by improving the outdated levees.
3. The park ranger should have taken Mr Embody’s weapon because he felt that the citizens were in danger.
4. By detaining Leonard Embody, Steve Ward made the park safer for its citizens.
5. Someone with character will do the right thing when no one is watching.
6. Students with good ethical behavior will think twice about making a dishonest decision.
7. Resorting to such conduct when faced with this obstacle proves that they didn’t understand what Harvard had taught them.
8. Although trading was limited and slow, the open Stock Exchange provided a good morale.
9. We are not as likely to vote if we grew up in a household where our parents didn’t vote.
10. The decriminalization of drugs in Portugal means that any citizen caught with illicit drugs can’t be incarcerated.
11. Regardless of whether a food is ‘clean’, the consumption of more than 500 calories per day will lead to weight gain.
12. The more satisfied we our with our lives, the less likely we are to help others.
13. The world operations of today are just simplified versions of the island of Yap.
14. Any unwanted sexual act is forced upon a person is considered rape.
15. Lack of consent due to a participant being the influence of alcohol or underage designates rape.
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It’s almost guaranteed that continuing to disregard our pollution and effects on Global Warming, storms like Sandy will occur more than once a year.
They needed to realize that the infrastructure of the levees, before Katrina, were outdated, maybe then the city’s people could have prevented such devastation.
The Park Ranger needed to be allowed to take the semi-automatic weapon away from Mr. Embody when he felt that the citizens in the park were in danger.
The most important idea to consider is the safety of all citizens, and in the case of Leonard Embody, those in the park that day were not in jeopardy because of the park ranger, Steve Ward, who smartly and correctly detained him.
As people of character we know to do the right thing even when no one is watching.
Students that learned ethical behavior now, rather then further down the road whe they face an ethical dilemma, will not take the opportunity of making a dishonest decision with it presents itself, they will think twice about taking that risk.
They clearly did not understand what Harvard was trying to teach them, if they needed to resort to such conduct in order to overcome this obstacle.
The Stock Exchange needed to be open for morale, even if trading was limited and slow, and it needed to be open for the Street, “to show that it was there,” Silverblatt explained.
If the parents of a man or woman haven’t voted in their lifetimes, then their child is not as likely to vote than they would be if he or she had been brought up in a household where the parents always vote.
Portugal will not legalize all drugs but will decriminalize them, which for the most part means that if a citizen is caught with illicit drugs, then they will not be incarcerated.
If a person consumes a caloric surplus of 500 calories per day, they are going to gain weight regardless of the type of food they’re eating, even if it is “clean.”
If someone is satisfied with one’s life, then they are less likely to help others in need.
If one were looking at the islanders of Yap, one could see a much simpler version of how the entire world operates today.
Rape is when any unwanted sexual act is forced upon a person. If the sexual act is not consensual, then that is considered rape.
Rape is when one of the participants can not or does not give consent. A party can not give consent if they are not of the proper age or under the influence or alcohol or drugs.
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1. It is almost guaranteed that if the disregard of our pollutions effect on global warming continues storms like sandy will be seen more then once a year.
2. If the outdated infrastructure of the levees, before Katrina,was taken into account, maybe then such devastation could’ve been prevented.
3. The semi-automatic weapon should have been taken away from Mr. Embody if the feeling of danger to the citizens or the park was present.
4. The most important idea to consider is the safety of all citizens, and in the case of Leonard Embody, those in the park that day could have been in jeopardy but the park ranger, Steve Ward, smartly and correctly detained him.
5. As people of character we know to do the right thing though no one may be watching.
6. Students who learn ethical behavior now, when further down the road faced with an ethical dilemma, although the opportunity of making a dishonest decision presents itself, maybe extra though will be given about taking that risk.
7. It was misunderstood, what Harvard was trying to teach them, if such conduct was used to overcome this obstacle.
8. The Stock Exchange needed to be open for morale, although trading can be limited and slow, and it needed to be open for the Street, “to show that it was there,” Silverblatt explained.
9. Though the parents of a man or woman may or may not have voted in their lifetimes, their child may not be as likely to vote than those who had been brought up in a household where the parents always vote may be.
10. Portugal will not legalize all drugs but will decriminalize them, which for the most part means that when a citizen is caught with illicit drugs, they will not be incarcerated.
11. Consuming a surplus of 500 calories a day will in fact cause weight gain no matter how “clean” the eating may be.
12. Someone satisfied with life is less likely to help others in need.
13. Looking upon the islanders of Yap, a much simpler version of the modern world is seen.
14. Rape is any unwanted sexual act forced upon a person.
15. Participants who do not give consent, or can not due to substance influence or improper age are victims of rape.
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Continuing to disregard our pollution and effects on Global Warming, will guarantee storms like Sandy occurring more than once a year.
The city’s people could have prevented the devastation of Katrina by realizing the outdated infrastructure of the levees.
The Park Ranger, feeling visiters were in danger, should have been allowed to take the semi-automatic weapon away from Mr. Embody.
Steve Ward, who smartly and correctly detained Embody, ensured the safety of those in the park who could have been in jeopardy.
As people of character we know to do the right thing even when not being watched.
By learning ethical behavior now, students will think twice about making dishonest decisions.
By resorting to such conduct in order to overcome the obstacle, the students clearly did not understand what Harvard was trying to teach them.
Despite the slowness of limited morale, the Stock Exchange needed to be open “to show that it was there.”
A child who is brought up in a household where his parents don’t vote is less likely to vote himself.
Portugal’s decriminalization of drugs will allow for citizens caught with drugs to face no charges.
Anyone consuming a caloric surplus of 500 calories per day is going to gain weight.
A personally satisfied person is less likely to help others in need of satisfaction.
Looking at the islanders of Yap reveals a much simpler version of the world.
Rape is an unwanted, nonconsensual sexual act forced upon a victim.
In any situation, being underage and under the influence of alcohol and drugs is not considered consent.
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1. We’ll see storms like Sandy more than once a year by disregarding pollution and its effects on Global Warming.
2. The devastation of Katrina could have prevented by realizing that the infrastructure of the levees was outdated.
3. Signs of danger would have allow the Park Ranger to take the semi-automatic weapon away from Mr. Embody.
***** The most important idea to consider is the safety of all citizens, and in the case of Leonard Embody, the safety of those in the park that day could have been in jeopardy if it were not for the park ranger, Steve Ward, who smartly and correctly detained him.
5. As people of character we know to do the right thing even if no one is watching.
6. If students learn ethical behavior now, then further down the road if they face an ethical dilemma, even if the opportunity of making a dishonest decision presents itself, maybe they’ll think twice about taking that risk.
7.They clearly did not understand what Harvard was trying to teach them, if they needed to resort to such conduct in order to overcome this obstacle.
8. The Stock Exchange needed to be open for morale, even if trading was limited and slow, and it needed to be open for the Street, “to show that it was there,” Silverblatt explained.
9. If the parents of a man or woman haven’t voted in their lifetimes, then their child is not as likely to vote than they would be if he or she had been brought up in a household where the parents always vote.
10. Portugal will not legalize all drugs but will decriminalize them, which for the most part means that if a citizen is caught with illicit drugs, then they will not be incarcerated.
11. If a person consumes a caloric surplus of 500 calories per day, they are going to gain weight regardless of the type of food they’re eating, even if it is “clean.”
12. If someone is satisfied with one’s life, then they are less likely to help others in need.
13. If one were looking at the islanders of Yap, one could see a much simpler version of how the entire world operates today.
14. Rape is when any unwanted sexual act is forced upon a person. If the sexual act is not consensual, then that is considered rape.
15. Rape is when one of the participants can not or does not give consent. A party can not give consent if they are not of the proper age or under the influence or alcohol or drugs.
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1. Our disregard for our pollution and the effects on Global Warming will lead to storms like Sandy more than once a year.
2. If they realized the infrastructure of the levees was outdated before Katrina, maybe the the city’s people could have prevented the devastation.
3. The park ranger should have been allowed to confiscate Mr. Embody’s semi-automatic weapon because he felt that the citizens in the park were in danger.
4.The park ranger, Steve Ward, smartly and correctly kept the citizens of the park safe that day by detaining Leonard Embody.
5. As people of character we know to do the right thing regardless of people watching or not.
6. Students that learn ethical behavior now, they will think twice before they risk making a dishonest decision in an ethical dilemma.
7. By resorting to such conduct to overcome the obstacle, they clearly did not understand what Harvard was trying to teach them.
8. Silverblatt explained that the Stock Exchange needed to be open for morale despite limited trading, and being open for the Street “to show it was there.
9. The parents of a man or woman who haven’t voted in their lifetimes would lead to a child who likely will not vote.
10. Citizens of Portugal caught with illicit drugs will not be incarcerated due to them being decriminalized.
11. A person who consumes a caloric surplus of 500 calories per day are going to gain weight regardless of what type of food they are eating.
12. Someone who is satisfied with their life are less likely to need help from others.
13. One could see a much simpler version of how the entire world operated today by looking at the islanders of Yap.
14. Rape is an unwanted sexual act forced upon a person without their consent.
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1. It’s almost guaranteed we will continue to see storms like Sandy by disregarding our pollution and effects on Global Warming.
2. Devastation could have been prevented if they had realized that the infrastructure of the levees, before Katrina, was outdated.
3. The Park Ranger should have been allowed to take the semi-automatic weapon away from Mr. Embody if he felt that the citizens in the park were in danger.
4. Park Ranger, Steve Ward, smartly and correctly detained Leonard Embody and protected all citizens that day in the Park.
5. As people of character we know who do the right thing regardless of who is watching.
6. Students learning ethical behavior now, may think twice about dishonest decisions further down the road.
7. By resorting to such conduct to overcome the obstacle, they clearly did not understand what Harvard was trying to teach them.
8. Even though trading was limited and slow, the Stock Exchange needed to be open for morale, Silverblatt explained.
9. Children who grow up in household of parents who don’t vote will likely not vote as adults.
10. Citizens caught with illicit drugs, will not be incarcerated due to Portugal not believing in that type of punishment.
11. A person who consumes a caloric surplus of 500 calories per day, will gain weight regardless of the type of food they’re eating.
12.If someone is satisfied with one’s life, then they are less likely to help others in need.
13. Looking at the Yap islanders today you can conclude that they lived much simpler lives as opposed to the version of how the world operates today.
14.Rape is unwanted when a sexual act is forced upon a person.
15.Rape is when one party does not give consent due to being under the influence of alcohol or drugs.
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