Definition Rewrite – MoneyTrees4

Is just enough too much?

It can be said that any amount of multivitamins is an excess because they are not conducive to a person’s health.  This can apply to my topic of the true usefulness of multivitamins because it is becoming more believed that the supplements are useless. If this is true, then perhaps we can also say that not only are they useless but can be detrimental to one’s health. Researchers are saying that any amount of multivitamins is an excess because we get all the vitamins and minerals from the foods we eat. When trying to figure out how much of these multivitamins we should take if any, we encounter words such as useful, health, and deficiency.

Now let’s say, contrary to growing belief, multivitamins do have some use. It can be disputed how much a person needs. Of course it will differ with age, gender, and other health characteristics.  What is deemed to be an excess to one person may be just right or not enough for another. In the case of multivitamins however, the only way we can compare what is too much for certain people is through multiple tests on their health. With that said, it is not a conscious decision on what may be too much for our bodies or what may not be enough. It would in-fact be easier to define a deficiency. With a deficiency in something, it is likely will see negative effects before an excess.

Nevertheless, one can evaluate how they feel after taking a certain supplement or eating a certain food. For example, taking a supplement for 30 days and recording how it makes you feel, followed by cutting the multivitamin cold turkey and recording how you feel. It is more likely for an adult to try this method than a child. The reason for this can be either because children are less likely to be health conscious; an adult is more likely to have some kind of disorder that prohibits them from eating too much unhealthy products. Regardless of the reason the point is that what is too much for one person can be regular or perfectly normal for another and vice versa.

With that said, an excess can be something tangible or otherwise, that is more than enough for a person. Whether or not this person realizes something is an excess such as in this case with supplements is irrelevant.

In order for us to evaluate the meaning of one word, there may be others that have to be clarified. When we look at what an excess is, we also should look at words such as proper, useful and health. These tie into an excess because in a way, a person’s point of view on the word can be related to how useful they believe something to be. We can also define usefulness as being of service or helpful. In the case of multivitamins however, the argument is that they are useless so any amount is an excess. The definition of proper easily varies from culture to culture, household to household, city to city etc. The important thing when arguing a definition is to remember the different point of views.

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6 Responses to Definition Rewrite – MoneyTrees4

  1. moneytrees4's avatar moneytrees4 says:

    Prof. I submitted my work last night before the deadline but only as an edit. I forgot we had to make an entire new post. Can this mistake be excused or will my grade still be effected?

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    • davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

      No, that’s no problem at all, Moneytrees. I’m tough on you about everything else, but I can be flexible on housekeeping issues. They have no bearing on how much your work improves. And anyway, I think I set the deadline for noon today to give everybody a little extra time, so you’re probably not late at all.

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  2. moneytrees4's avatar moneytrees4 says:

    Feedback requested. Grade requested.

    Feedback provided. Grade provided. —DSH

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  3. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    I have no better idea after reading your essay whether multivitamins are useful or not, or whether a particular person is more likely to take too much or too little of any particular vitamin than I did before I started, moneytrees. You seem determined to avoid making any specific claims at all.

    If you were to outline this essay, and restrict yourself to a one-sentence summary to represent each paragraph, you’d find that no argument results. We could try this together. You need to conference to discuss your progress and collect some grades. Make an appointment.

    Grade code 5D3

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  4. moneytrees4's avatar moneytrees4 says:

    Title: How much is too much?

    Multivitamin supplements can be seen as an excess because the are not helpful for ones health.

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  5. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    That’s a good title, moneytrees.

    But you don’t answer the question in your essay.

    Surely there must be research to support that claim that taking multivitamins actually does harm to people who end up taking too much of a particular vitamin. If you provided such evidence, you could claim to have answered the question: How Much B12 is Too Much?

    As for your recommended first sentence: “Multivitamin supplements can be seen as an excess because the are not helpful for ones health,” it doesn’t make as much sense as it appears to. Many things are “not helpful for one’s health” that are not “an excess.” Watching baseball is not helpful for one’s health, but we would never call it “excessive.”

    What I think you mean is that multivitamins contain so many ingredients that, while we might benefit from some of them, most are a waste of money. We already get enough of the ingredients from our diets. On that basis, the sentence would be: Multivitamin supplements are excessive because we don’t need the nutrients they provide.” (In other words, they exceed our needs.)

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