Critical Thinking–qdoba

PTSD is a psychological disorder that is neurologically centered, meaning the brain is affected, specifically in the amygdala.  Experiencing or seeing a traumatic event, which usually occurs for war veterans after they return from their stationed unit, causes this disorder.  If being diagnosed with Post Traumatic Stress Disorder, the following symptoms may be experienced: nightmares, insomnia, severe panic/anxiety, hallucinations, or flashbacks.  In Mac Mclelland’s article, “Is PTSD Contagious?” she hypothesizes that this disorder can be passed down to beloved ones or anyone surrounding the victim, as if it were the common cold of the flu, being transportable. The dreadful, yearly, common cold can be spread from person to person in numerous ways. Through physical contact, or by the infectious microbe traveling through the air can cause the common cold to be caught. While PTSD is clearly not the common cold, its ways in developing it is quite similar to the yearly runny nose sickness. Mclelland stresses how others can develop PTSD through the constant surrounding of the victim. The emotions and bipolar behaviors act as the infectious microbe traveling through the air.

Caleb Vine is an Iraq war veteran who has returned to his hometown in Alabama of 2006.  Unlike Caleb, his wife Brannan has never been to war nor has she experienced any warlike activities.  However, Mclelland mentions how Brannan has been experiencing some of, if not all, of Caleb’s symptoms of PTSD.  She states, “BRANNAN VINES HAS NEVER BEEN to war. But she’s got a warrior’s skills: hyperawareness, hypervigilance, adrenaline-sharp quick-scanning for danger, for triggers. Super stimuli-sensitive. Skills on the battlefield.”  Mclelland is suggesting that like an illness, it can be contagious can the symptoms can be passed to people who are constantly surrounding the victim with PTSD. In the article, Mclelland describes Brannan as becoming “so furious her ears literally started ringing” when she is at the local CVS waiting in line behind an elderly women who is taking more time to get her money in order than expected. She becomes furious with an inconvenient situation and her “super stimuli-sensitive” emotions start to kick in. The CVS situation does not demonstrate “adrenaline-sharp quick-scanning for danger” or “warrior-like skills,” however, it does depict who she is slowly developing this mental illness she was not responsible developing.

Brannan describes her be screaming at Caleb in efforts to awaken him from his horrific nightmares late at night.  However she does make it clear that she has never been beaten up by her husband, jumped out of bed in the middle of the night in the fear of being raped, like many other military wives have.  Both Caleb and Brannan have the fear that their six-year-old daughter, Katie, would develop the symptoms they both are experiencing and have it affect her behavior and mental state for the rest of her life. Both of Katie’s parents dread the thought that this illness can be forwarded to their daughter, like it had been for Brannan.  They do accept the fact that she is not like any other little six-year-old girl.  Mclelland mentions how little Katie would lash out or act out in class just because another student would get her angry.  Even though, PTSD is a disorder that cannot be “literally” contagious, it is possible, according to Mclelland, someone can develop these symptoms if they are around someone with them for a while.

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  1. qdobacomp2's avatar qdobacomp2 says:

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  2. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    OK, qdoba, let’s see what kind of critic you are.

    P1. OK. You’ve established that PTSD is a mental illness caused by trauma. Then you shared Mac (she’s a girl) McClelland’s hypothesis: the disorder can be passed down to people nearby. When you say “as if it were an illness” you lose me. You have established that it is an illness (although you called it a neurological disorder). “As if” means it’s not. Or maybe you mean, “She hypothesizes that this disorder can be passed to others . . . as if it could be transported.” What sense would that make?

    Your job as the Critical Reader, qdoba, is to examine the claims carefully for reasonableness, logic, sufficiency (the rest of the list is available at the assignment).

    You haven’t actually clarified what it is McClelland claims, or whether it’s a factual claim, or really just an analogy.

    P2. Here you specify that McClelland’s claim is a Resemblance Claim, qdoba. She doesn’t mean that PTSD is literally contagious; she means it looks contagious; it shares with contagious diseases one characteristic: it seems to spread to others in the household.

    I’m not sure what the CVS example is supposed to prove. Do you cite it as evidence of mental illness? It certainly doesn’t seem to demonstrate a warrior’s skill. It sounds psychopathically sensitive to stimuli though.

    P3. What is this odd “would be” tense, qdoba?

    I’m very confused by this paragraph. It doesn’t seem to be a critical analysis of McClelland’s claims at all. (Read the assignment again and ask for clarification if you don’t understand. Your job is to evaluate claims as we did in class for the Let’s Harvest Death Row Organs video.)

    Weird grammar:
    —nor has been jumped out of bed
    —Katie would inhibit these symptoms and would affect her
    —she not like any other girl

    This last sentence is good, qdoba. You clarify that PTSD is not contagious (I don’t know if that’s your conclusion or your interpretation of McClelland’s, but I’m happy to see it anyway.), but that symptoms can be passed on to others nearby.

    Wouldn’t that be odd? Suppose measles was spread by measles virus cells. (It is!). Now suppose a person who lived with someone with measles could develop the rash, the fever, the high white-cell count of a measles sufferer WITHOUT ever contacting the virus. That would be very strange, and very similar to what’s happening to the Vines.

    Either Brannan and Katie are developing the symptoms of PTSD (post-TRAUMATIC stress disorder) without the TRAUMA (which would be the virus), OR living with Caleb is their TRAUMA.

    Which sounds right to you? Is this enough to do another draft, qdoba?
    I await your reaction and your revisions.

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  3. qdobacomp2's avatar qdobacomp2 says:

    I have revised this post, please reconsider for a regrade
    regrade please

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