Je Suis — skyblue

When I first glanced at the header and graphics on the home page I had a feeling that it may have something to do with the Charlie Hebdo massacre of cartoonists that recently occurred in Paris.

As I began to analyze the picture and different meanings that it may portray I picked up that Charlie Brown’s character in the Peanuts series is usually a happy child who is usually hanging out with his friends and best pal Snoopy. When we are children it is almost like we do not have a reality or a care in the world. The new charlie posted on the page is viewed as an older, dirty, unhappy, middle-aged man who looks very disappointed and angry. This may be posted as the header and blog theme because of it accurately describes how a majority of the public views the Hebdo attacks. The cartoon, although not drawn as a reaction to the massacre it provokes a reaction out of the viewers to let them know how angry and hurt the public is about Hebdo tragedy. Charlie is famous as an innocent young child, his innocence is abruptly taken away because of the tragedy and horrors that age and time have placed upon him. These responsibilities of the real world leave him unhappy and disgruntled. This is shown in his face as his eyebrow is shrunken down into his eyes, and his frown is dramatically drawn.

The letters on the header are orange and in a bold font. This draws a viewers in, demanding their attention on the incident. Charlie is placed dead center in the middle of the header, it gives it sort of a disappointed or sad feeling.

The cartoonist may have chosen Charlie Brown as the choice for this display because his name is Charlie, the same as Charlie Hebdo. The cartoonist also may have picked Charlie Brown because he is a well known cartoon character who everyone seemed to love, and to see him portrayed as a sad angry old man may strike a cord with some peoples emotions, getting a reaction out of them about the massacre.

I believe that the choice of this final product was chosen for a composition course because composition courses are surrounded and based off of writing. Writing in a way is similar to drawing that cartoonists do for a living. Writing and cartooning are a way of freely expressing emotion. It very well could have been an attack on writers if not cartoonists. It could have also been chosen for a composition course because it is considered a controversial topic to write about. Controversial topics are good essay topics because there are so many views and takes on how or why the tragedy took place. It provokes a need to write and respond to the massacre.

My view has changed since I first saw the header of Charlie Brown, I wasn’t aware of all the terrorism and massacre that went along with it that changed my views. I believe the cartoonist did this to grab the viewers attention and draw attention to the Hebdo issue.

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4 Responses to Je Suis — skyblue

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    Skyblue, you didn’t request feedback on this post. It’s a fine first draft, but of course, first drafts are shredder fodder. It responds as you were invited to respond, with a reflection on your own reactions to the graphic. As you revise, unless you’re satisfied with your first grade, remove or radically reduce your personal impressions and concentrate on the meaning of the cartoon, the graphic with text, and the choice of such a final product as the emblem for a composition course.

    I can tell you that the cartoon was not drawn in reaction to Charlie Hebdo. It existed prior to the massacre and was appropriated by the designer who paired it with the text, which the designer also did not create but appropriated.

    Eliminate the 2nd person.

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  2. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    This is not the grade you want, skyblue. Leave a feedback request when you have made revisions.

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  3. skybluecomp2's avatar skybluecomp2 says:

    Thank you for your feedback, I went back and changed my second person and took out contractions, as well as reduced a lot of my personal impressions. Instead I replaced it with the reason the image was chosen for the header and background. Also I included in this draft why it would be a good emblem for a composition class. Thank you for your time and feedback!

    regrade requested
    Regrade provided. —DSH

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