Wed. Jan 28

fei on the island had no value just stone, got left in water but man was still the richest cause word of mouth

same happened at fort knox with french and their gold….took all their gold into containers and kept safe

money was only worth what you could buy .99 chips 20 bags, $10 glasses 2

work all week but get handed no paper..money just a check in the bank aka fei in the water

Monday Feb.2 2015

only visual assignment is for pro, others can hurt you so revise at least once. ask for grade plz or feedback plz after revision

use “we” rather than you or your….get rid of pronouns

eliminate all expressions of what you believe…no..i believe or my opinion

only choose what is really important from a source or author to help support your argument rather than quoting the whole piece

chose countertopic on side where it listed for next 12 weeks

use animated language that helps the reader or audience want to read your essay after or following a detailed abstract argument

look at examples of animated language to help make stone money better

gov doesn’t determine what the value of money is just the fact of the difference from a dollars bill to a 5 dollars bill all not how much of something you could buy with a 1 dollars bill

Wed. Feb 4

D=F C=D make improvements and look at the different easy that were posted to achieve ideas

Monday Feb.9

must meet three time the whole semester once before spring break, once after, and one final time during last week of semester.only can achieve grade from meeting which can be set up through conferences page

kill most pronouns if not able to the preferred pronoun for this class is “we” and keep sentences in same tense such as present, past, or future.

deadline for rewrite has been changed to wed. 12am noon

Wed. Feb 11

In the video you saw several hand and facial jesters, but the ones you should be most aware of is F.A.S.T. Fast stands for facial loose of control in the muscles, arms lose ability to be controlled, speech starts to slur, and then it is finally time to call 911. F.A.S.T is a message to help boost stroke awareness.

Reason for citing quotes is for finding evidence or sources to help straighten your argument and to find people who think differently from you.

reply constructive criticism on professor’s post

Wed Feb 18

Put definition and categorical claims for PTSD in your work to help support the main idea of the post. Different types of being contagious such as yawning seems to make others yawn or a teacher being enthusiastic about a subject then suddenly other students become more enthusiastic…no bug, but both are still called “contagious”

It’s more like matching behavior such as domestic violence or the beating of a child, when the child grows up he still has those memories an mirrors what he was taught while growing up which is violence leading to the beating of his kids or wife.

Different because it isn’t immediate such as catching the meseals within seconds compared to your father having a weird strange and angry attitude for a year which would cause PTSD.

Father has fear of getting shot each day, Mother fears making it through the night as she sleeps and her husband swing his arms at her. Such as a child living in a ghetto neighborhood being around destruction and violence while hearing gun shots every day can cause him to have PTSD.  When Brennan acts out she is classified as delinquent.

Mon March 2

Just ordered pizza in class, Dave’s a cool professor that can be a professor for life if the student chooses…also a really kind guy in general.

Select a comp meeting soon and chose which assignment you want to be able to rewrite

Mon. March 9

First sentence is crucial to your essay, remember to keep info creditable or you will lose the audience.  Have good strong claims to help get your point across but also in short creditable sentences.

Wed. March 11

no weaker sentence then saying something is. Elephants are tourted.(passive) Circus owners tourte elephants. (active) Elephants suffer torture

Mon. March 23

The water molecules do not go into the simple coffee grain holder when turned upside down in a container of water because it is designed to keep small grains of coffee inside so it does the same with air.

Wed. March 25

remember to edited my notes at every class, also that evidence from the author is not sufficient enough for your essay add out side sorcuses that go with your argument and state your own opion and influences.

Mon. March 30

Post reply on card puzzle in the agenda. listen to story about Mac McClelland about having PTSD from secondary experiences. Also posted in Intuitive Predictions about statements being true or false, unreasonable or reasonable, and being good or bad.

Mon. April 6

“Attended class”

Wed. April 8

A writers sentence structure is key to achieving the audience full attention, so each and every sentence isn’t repetitive or boring.

Wed. April 15

Left comments on Juggler’s Casual assignment  Skyblue’s Rebuttal assignment  and Hashmeesh’s definition assignment…..got to leave early cause I posted all three comments.

Mon. April 20

Just edited a rebuttal argument on if happiness rely has true meaning behind it by editing first 2 sentences of the 4th paragraph and then added a title.  Also answer several questions on 4 causal arguments.