2/15 projector broken, went over class work made comment on essays

4/13 absent sick

4/8 leaving out the weak link and win an argument with really bad cards. no one will ever be the wiser. teenage drivers get more tickets.

4/6 absent

4/1 went over card response titles and causations  go over professor recommendations assignment due sunday  did in class assignment

3/30 Did card exercise all 4 should be turned over. answer was card 4 and 1 Worked on true false reasonable unreasonable good bad exercise 50 was so many but they were all interesting points mostly

3/25 Learning about the false analogy rebuttal and relating it to the Fukushima disaster and saying that something as the nuclear disaster that happen being unpredictable didn’t cause it to happen. Making the rebuttal effective by changing my choice of words was something I learned. type in scholar before google for advanced searches research to form a thesis, not to prove a thesis positive reinforcement is depending on definition can be negative rebuttal argument-research something that proves your hypothesis wrong

3/23 my i key is not working, it keeps giving my the symbol [. this symbol will take the place of i for this my notes why does air not go out of s coffee filter. the air does not leave the filter because of the properties of water. Cohes[on and surface tens[on. the hydrogen oxygen bonds [n a water molecule makes [t polar thus caus[ng the molecule to st[ck to each other and other th[ngs that or polar[zed. w[th the metal on the coffee f[lter so close together the water molecule st[cks to the metal and to [tself form[ng a layer that traps a[r. l[ke my classmate showed [f the f[lter [s dry [t w[ll let the a[r out. do def[n[t[on essay ask spec[f[c quest[ons for feedback 3/11 went on rate my professor there is no weaker sentence then one that says “there is” make sentences with active verbs have a better subject elephants are tortured circus owners torture elephants elephants suffer torture which one with the subject is your real subject active subject does something and passive verbs subject doesn’t do anything but gets it done to it choose active

3/9 can’t win first sentence but can lose have a good opening 1 sentence can make or break essay find topics that make people argue very debatable claims in sentences don’t need to be true but shouldn’t be false make things seem reasonable don’t have it be impossible

3/4 How many claims are there, Many different claims can be in one statement can it be proven went over safer saws and claims

3/2 Professor went you jimmy carters haircut and told us to change our split Bought us pizza Make conference appointment and have certain topics and essays to talk about no tuesday assignment but will have a different topic to go over wednesday be fimilar with source material Sunday 5 more sources next tuesday night nothing are things disputable things are all based on perspective new assignment

2/25 Do words actually mean what they mean and why are there different meanings to each word what does being a rapist mean the different meanings throughout time how to make a definition and argument 2 sources works cited link them standard mla format

2/23 going over my notes and how to get reply grades and replies working on hypothesis don’t just pick sides find one good reason and examine it in depth narrow to a proposition working on different types of arguments argue something specific and argue something complex narrow topic that can be broadens from a variety of angles recognizing the problems of our papers so that they can be corrected sentences require logic and when you write them down they they should sound logical

2/18 definition claim how to phrase PTSD to make different claims categorical causal and combination of both and how it relates to PTSD went over grammar

2/16 read passage from book things are portioned and now people buy more for it food should be put on the plate at the stove top rather than put food on plate at the table and you eat less when plater is the same color as your food post assignments on time have reading for an hour and write analysis video analysis on organ taking from people who don’t need them

2/11 take the spoon out of my mouth can we change our minds when on the brink of death you will regret jumping of that bridge at the near end don’t do it biological dilemma counterintuitive when are terriost attacks are defined as such when they just attack indiscriminately not any specific group or person don’t hit a brick went over video stroke controversial topic and explain it in a new way finding sources that aree with you and share them with new people it has no value just bringing the opinion of other peoples in and putting them in one place better to find a differing subject and add it to ours so that you aren’t just finding people you agree with but you don’t agree with and make a good argument full of ideas and useful don’t have a idea wen reading until you start writing re enough of the white paper to figure out what is in a white paper and leave some feedback constructive critiques due monday

2/9 make an appointment made one for march 11 6p, memories are different every time you access them using your current experiences changes them cupcakes never happened we’ve been duped their does not work avoids specifying a gender all/their drop in random genders drop pronouns completely you can write without using them and have everything still make sense denzel washington isn’t african american very difficult to determine choose topic first 5 sources next week rewrite visual avoid broad arguments be specific if it looks like it could mean multiple things reword it until it means only one things, arguable researchable verifiable  consistent

2/4 categorizing post summaries should not be wordy and should get to the point connect ideas and do not be redundant reasonable claims make feedback on the feedback he gives make good points purposeful summaries use things that will further your argument and reshape them into explaining your situation better three parent eggs for babies very counter intuitive americans should stop being ignorant about diseases Americans blows everything out of porpotion and make people feel bad for our attitude

2/2 went over grades and rewrites went over what we did last week on linking sources talking about using the word you and you should never use it as well as 2nd person engage on people on an entirely different on a common human experience or social phenomena that we have rational opinions about keep the reader reading every senetence don’t use i believe detracts from your own credibility. get rid of them altogether don’t recount background unless needed to keep readers intrested should address the cartoon as soon as possible will add small editions of writing to the tab when have new ideas about tips to improve only summarize the part of the article the serves the purpose of your arugement find an echo of your own idea don’t say everything the author said but use stuff that would give us an advantage to not prove a point we already think is true but to prove that it is actually fact being careful of what we summarize to help readers instead of distract them pick a topic for the next 10 or 12 weeks to dive deep into research and it should be a counterintuitive and what it mens to be counterintuitive hire cows use physicals objects to connect reader to the topic to make it more memorable take it out of abstract concepts to make it understandable for people to eat the market decides what the prices are not the gov january started off with war by Edwin starr Went over how to do my notes on blog went over how to insert link went over revisions and first drafts being crap rip up first draft as soon as i can and get rid of my favorite sentences because i holds me back save only the structure or idea, lose the sentences talk about late assignment talked about stone money taked abou t yap and the fey and money and a guy writing a book about it was germeny colony limestone disk talked abou the depression france and gold at fort knox money is worth what you will get in return for it brazil created real brazil went into super inflation