The image of Charlie Brown was a French interpretation of a sad and broken version of our beloved Charlie Brown with the illustrator own twist of their own thoughts. It looks as if Charlie has grown up realized the crucial harsh reality of the word. The cartoon looks as if he is depressed about a troublesome situation which there is no control over. This image depicts the feelings of people who are allowed to portray their own feelings but must sit back and be upset about a situation they have no control over, such as Charlie is doing here. The illustrator wanted the audience to realize the importance of this cartoon as a message of how crucial freedom of speech really is to people as a society, country, and human beings.
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I’m glad to see this, thatdude. Now, please open it in Edit and place it into the correct category before you Update so that we’ll be able to find it when we need it. Thank you. I would do it for you, but I want to make sure you’re aware of where and how to choose categories, for the practice.
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Thatdude, you didn’t request feedback on this post, so my remarks will be brief. It’s certainly an acceptable first draft, but of course, first drafts are shredder fodder. As you revise, break your work into paragraphs focusing on small topics. When you do, you’ll realize how much your comments repeat.
For example:
1a. Charlie seems sad
1b. he stands for what he thinks is right.
2a. Charlie seems broken, dirty, and sad
2b. but also still standing and ready to move
2c. which is what the artist wished to bestow
3a. Charlie looks such as sad and hurt
3b. but still standing and ready to express his freedom
3c. which terrorists tried to take away.
I can tell you that the cartoon was not drawn in reaction to Charlie Hebdo. It existed prior to the massacre and was appropriated by the designer who paired it with the text, which the designer also did not create but appropriated.
Eliminate the 2nd person.
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This is not the grade you want, thatdude. Revisions highly recommended. Leave a feedback request when you’re ready.
Awaiting your reply.
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