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Men define rape. It is counterintuitive that throughout human history women have suffered rape by men, not the other way around, but that the gender that rapes, not the gender that is victimized, has been in charge of defining what constitutes rape.
For my essay, I will research men’s evolving definition of rape, even in present day, and how currently, women are taking over control of the definition. Hammurabi’s Code, which dates around 1780 B.C., is the first known account that holds what it means for a woman to be raped. Since then, new laws have defined what it means for a woman to get raped and the consequences of the rape. Laws, such as Hammurabi’s Code and King Edward I’s Statutes of Westminster, inconceivably, have been made by men, and not those who are actually getting raped: women.
In 2011, Republicans in the House of Representatives attracted opposition and criticism when they attempted to redefine rape by passing new legislation, in hopes to limit the exceptions to the ban on federal funding for abortions. Before this uproar in the House, the definition of rape was “the carnal knowledge of a female forcibly and against her will. Included are rapes by force and attempts or assaults to rape. Statutory offenses (no force used–victim under age of consent) are excluded.” This definition had held since 1929, and many Feminist supporters felt it outdated, and called on the FBI to reform the definition. My essay will explore whether the United States is progressing forward in defining rape and how women are the driving force behind this evolution.
Background: This article illustrates the timeline, beginning in 1780 B.C. until present day, of men’s definition of rape, that women are their fathers’ property and any damage, such as rape, is property damage. Todd Akin, a Representative, believes women are responsible for the rape if they get pregnant. This article equates the ancient beliefs of rape and the GOP and Akin’s views.
How I Intend to Use It: It has taken a lot of time for individuals and governments to evolve the definition of rape in a forward thinking way. Many previous and ancient definitions have blamed women for getting raped and pregnant, or how if a women does not fight off the attack, it is not rape. Only recently has there been forward progression. The first definition of rape in Hammurabi’s code states rape of a virgin is property damage to her father and she is the one responsible for it. The present definition of rape is “the penetration, no matter how slight, of the vagina or anus with any body part or object, or oral penetration by a sex organ of another person, without the consent of the victim.”
2. Should the FBI Redefine Rape?
Background: The FBI has functioned under the definition of rape as being, “The carnal knowledge of a female forcibly and against her will. Included are rapes by force and attempts or assaults to rape. Statutory offenses (no force used–victim under age of consent) are excluded.” The Feminist Majority Foundation is seeking the FBI Director and Attorney General to change the outdated definition. Much of what it means to be raped, according to the activists, is missing from the previously stated definition.
How I Intend to Use It: Feminist supporters are making moves to change, as a whole, the government’s definition of rape. They are now taking control of what it really means to be raped.
3. The House GOP’s Plan to Redefine Rape
Background: For many years, federal laws have banned funding for abortions, including pregnancies that have resulted from rape or incest. Under a new bill, “No Taxpayer Funding for Abortion Act,” funding for abortions would only be given to pregnancies resulting from forced rape, thereby ruling out funding for a vast amount of abortions. Enacting this law could cause victims to prove they were forcibly raped instead of, for example, being coerced into having sex. Feminist groups, abortion-rights groups, and other government officials protest this idea, and believe rape does not always mean physical force against a woman.
How I Intend to Use It: Steph Sterling, a lawyer and senior advisor to the National Women’s Law center, said, “This bill takes us backwards to a time when just saying no wasn’t enough to qualify as rape.” Presently, having the absence of permission is what constitutes as rape. In past centuries, rape was more complicated, but has evolved into simply saying no.
4. Todd Akin, Paul Ryan, and Redefining Rape
Background: Representative Todd Akin defended his belief that victims of “legitimate rape” can’t get pregnant due to female “biological defenses” that prevent rape victims from getting pregnant. This essentially means a woman that became pregnant, must have welcomed the sex. welcomed it if she became pregnant. “Forcible” rape is another term that leaves out many other terms people consider rape, such as statutory rape and date rape. Stating a rape as “forcible,” denies victims who were not physically forced to have sex, such as statutory rape or coerced into sex, their right to a federally funded abortion.
How I Intend to Use It: Some government officials are blaming victims of rape for getting pregnant. It is an attitude that mirrors earlier opinions from ancient times, illustrating some officials are regressing back to earlier definitions of rape.
5. An Updated Definition of Rape
Background: The Attorney General announced, independent of Republicans attempting to prevent funding for abortions for rape victims, in 2012, a revised definition of rape, in hopes to more accurately report rapes nationwide. The new definition is “The penetration, no matter how slight, of the vagina or anus with any body part or object, or oral penetration by a sex organ of another person, without the consent of the victim.”
How I Intend to Use It: I will support that definition of rape has progressed.