Critical Thinking–qdoba

PTSD is a psychological disorder that is neurologically centered, meaning the brain is affected, specifically in the amygdala.  Experiencing or seeing a traumatic event, which usually occurs for war veterans after they return from their stationed unit, causes this disorder.  If being diagnosed with Post Traumatic Stress Disorder, the following symptoms may be experienced: nightmares, insomnia, severe panic/anxiety, hallucinations, or flashbacks.  In Mac Mclelland’s article, “Is PTSD Contagious?” she hypothesizes that this disorder can be passed down to beloved ones or anyone surrounding the victim, as if it were the common cold of the flu, being transportable. The dreadful, yearly, common cold can be spread from person to person in numerous ways. Through physical contact, or by the infectious microbe traveling through the air can cause the common cold to be caught. While PTSD is clearly not the common cold, its ways in developing it is quite similar to the yearly runny nose sickness. Mclelland stresses how others can develop PTSD through the constant surrounding of the victim. The emotions and bipolar behaviors act as the infectious microbe traveling through the air.

Caleb Vine is an Iraq war veteran who has returned to his hometown in Alabama of 2006.  Unlike Caleb, his wife Brannan has never been to war nor has she experienced any warlike activities.  However, Mclelland mentions how Brannan has been experiencing some of, if not all, of Caleb’s symptoms of PTSD.  She states, “BRANNAN VINES HAS NEVER BEEN to war. But she’s got a warrior’s skills: hyperawareness, hypervigilance, adrenaline-sharp quick-scanning for danger, for triggers. Super stimuli-sensitive. Skills on the battlefield.”  Mclelland is suggesting that like an illness, it can be contagious can the symptoms can be passed to people who are constantly surrounding the victim with PTSD. In the article, Mclelland describes Brannan as becoming “so furious her ears literally started ringing” when she is at the local CVS waiting in line behind an elderly women who is taking more time to get her money in order than expected. She becomes furious with an inconvenient situation and her “super stimuli-sensitive” emotions start to kick in. The CVS situation does not demonstrate “adrenaline-sharp quick-scanning for danger” or “warrior-like skills,” however, it does depict who she is slowly developing this mental illness she was not responsible developing.

Brannan describes her be screaming at Caleb in efforts to awaken him from his horrific nightmares late at night.  However she does make it clear that she has never been beaten up by her husband, jumped out of bed in the middle of the night in the fear of being raped, like many other military wives have.  Both Caleb and Brannan have the fear that their six-year-old daughter, Katie, would develop the symptoms they both are experiencing and have it affect her behavior and mental state for the rest of her life. Both of Katie’s parents dread the thought that this illness can be forwarded to their daughter, like it had been for Brannan.  They do accept the fact that she is not like any other little six-year-old girl.  Mclelland mentions how little Katie would lash out or act out in class just because another student would get her angry.  Even though, PTSD is a disorder that cannot be “literally” contagious, it is possible, according to Mclelland, someone can develop these symptoms if they are around someone with them for a while.

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Agenda WED FEB 18

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Mechanical Troubles

that/which

PTSD was once thought of as an illness which only afflicted veterans returning from war.

PTSD was once thought of as an illness, that was true until early in the 21st century.

who/whom

This condition is visible in the family of Brannan and Caleb Vines, who are noticing the same traits in their daughter Katie as those exhibited by her father, whom has PTSD.

2nd person

When you see a girl suffer through the same episodes as her father does, it begins to harm her safety and well being.

PTSD is something that you usually hear about when someone goes through a traumatic experience or a solider coming home from war.

Can something without germs be contagious? Can we catch behaviors and mirror others? According to this article you can.

Needless it

When you see a girl suffer through the same episodes as her father does, it begins to harm her safety and well being.

unclear antecedent

One example is the time Katie yelled at and attacked an elderly lady because she got angry and lost control.

an extra that

Mclelland claims that because of Branna’s exposure to a great deal of Caleb’s trauma that she has developed her own case of PTSD.

Title Punctuation

The article, Is PTSD Contagious? by Mac McClelland, explores the dynamics of a troubled family.

Possessive apostrophes

Brannan Vines is an inspiring, selfless woman, who puts other’s needs before her own.

Brannan Vines and many others are desperately searching for help and need other’s support.

This statement is assuming that Brannan has a warrior’s skills, however the ones listed are not exclusively warrior’s skills.

Having Caleb’s opinion of others’ opinions about himself can only be used to gain sympathy from the reader’s.

Mclelland claims that Brannan Vines husband Caleb Vines has passed on his PTSD to her.

After Calebs services were over, he developed PTSD.

Pronoun disagreement

Sometimes an event can trigger a flashback and make someone with PTSD feel like they’re experiencing that traumatic event all over again.

If there were a PTSD victim who could suppress their symptoms or not show any at all, their PTSD would not be transferred at all

Commas and Quotes

In the Mother Jones article, “Is PTSD Contagious?”, the author proposes that the symptoms of PTSD are transferable, specifically from an army veteran to his wife.

Some parts of the article, however, offer insight into why PTSD may be “contagious“.

“Hyperawareness”, “hypervigilance”, and “adrenaline-sharp quick-scanning” are all skills, not necessarily related to being a warrior.

In the article “Is PTSD Contagious?”, written by Mac Mclelland, she claims that PTSD can be spread to surrounding people.

due to

Mclelland claims that due to Brannan’s exposure to a great deal of  Caleb’s trauma, she has developed her own case of PTSD.

misplaced modifier

After returning home, some of his symptoms of PTSD started rubbing off onto his wife Brannan.

In-Class Exercise

Copy and paste the problematic sentences into the Reply field below and correct them.

 

 

 

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Worth Sharing—Critical Reading

Definition Claims/
Category Claims

We haven’t talked yet about different types of claims, so I don’t expect you to readily recognize a definition/categorical claim. On the face of it, it’s clearly a claim about how a term is defined or what category of thing it belongs to.

1. Definition. When you say PTSD is a psychological disorder, in your first five words you’re making a definition claim.
2. Categorical. Your first categorical claim is the naming of several examples of PTSD symptoms. They all belong to the category: Symptoms of PTSD.
3. Causal. Your next claim, that PTSD develops following trauma is a causal claim (Trauma causes PTSD).
4. Categorical/Causal. The question the article raises “Is PTSD contagious?,” depending on how we phrase it, is either a categorical question (Does PTSD belong in the category “contagious conditions”?), or a causal question (Can one human “catch” PTSD from another human?).

Calling PTSD “contagious” also seems like an analogy, doesn’t it? Is a yawn contagious? Is enthusiasm? Only in a poetic sense.

Yawning isn’t spread through bacteria or viruses, so it isn’t literally contagious. Neither is enthusiasm. But it spreads similarly to diseases: one person in close proximity to others transfers a condition: a physical yawn or an purposeful emotional energy to a roomful of other people, for example.

What do you think? What’s the answer? Is PTSD transferred from one person to another? If so, is the process more like spreading the flu, or more like spreading enthusiasm? Or a third way you could explain in a different analogy?

Did Brannan “catch” Caleb’s PTSD? Or is hers an entirely new case?

Below are some admirable observations made by your classmates before noon today, WED FEB 18. Others may have been made later, but you won’t find them here.

thatdude

When Caleb has outbreaks in public, he can be seen as a “normal crazy veteran,” but the reaction is very different when a young girl like his daughter Katie acts out.

tagfcomp2

The author incorporates the repeated phrase, “Brannan Vines has never been to war,” to emphasis secondhand Post Traumatic Stress Disorder. The phrase suggests that Brannan hasn’t physically experienced the traumatic events that her husband has from war.

albert

Nevertheless, when the author writes of the“103,200, or 228,875, or 336,000Americans who served in Iraq or Afghanistan and came back with PTSD” and later counts “115,000 to 456,000 with traumatic brain injury,” the disparity of the numbers is so large that McClelland might be suggesting that not all cases are produced by the war experience.

mopar

Post Traumatic Stress Disorder, or PTSD, is a mental health condition that can be triggered by hearing or seeing an event occur.

Doctors are perplexed as to why Caleb suffers like he does. They don’t understand why all the things he’s been through caused him to get PTSD but not the other soldiers he was with. Some hypothesize that it’s because of unhappily coded proteins, misbehaving amygdala or even family history. If family history is a factor in who gets PTSD and who doesn’t, obviously it’s possible for PTSD to in fact be contagious/genetic even.

CptPooStain

A victim of a terrorist attack, or even a bank robbery in which one was involved could open the door for PTSD, the disorder in which, in the aftermath of a traumatic event, trigger events can cause the affected person to relive the trauma and exhibit the physical, emotional, and even psychological symptoms of a fresh trauma.

Maybe PTSD’s blow-back can reach further than previously determined, but what I’ve been reading about the Vines family is just a case of personality mirroring. If Caleb has never been to war, but he acted as he does, terrorizing and abusing his wife and child, the mirroring would be the same.

Thegreatestpenn

The statement that she turns into a snotty rage machine undermines the original statement that she has warrior skills.

Caleb has been home since 2006, way more than enough time for Brannan to catch his symptoms.

After Caleb came home from war, he was diagnosed with PTSD.  The statement that his wife had “more than enough time” assumes that she has been exposed to her husband long enough to catch his disorder, assuming that she can catch it at all.  How does the writer of this article know how long it takes for someone to catch PTSD from someone else, considering it isn’t like a typical disease whereas transmission would be from a physical pathogen.

Hashmeesh

PTSD is a condition that is developed by a person psychologically and is not something that can be spread.

The warrior skills McClelland claims for Brannan—super-sensitivity to stimuli, hyper-awareness, hyper-vigilance, and adrenaline-sharp quick-scanning for danger—are symptoms of PTSD.

Mclelland claims that due to Brannan being exposed a great deal to Caleb’s trauma that she has develop her own case of PTSD.

juggler

Can something without germs be contagious? Can we catch behaviors and mirror others? According to this article you can.

Brannan Vines is the wife of the war vet that has been diagnosed with PTSD. “But she’s got a warrior’s skills: hyperawareness, hypervigilance, adrenaline-sharp quick-scanning for danger, for triggers.”

  • The writer is comparing Brannan’s skills to the skills or traits of a warrior. This is a clever analogy to lure the reader in and feel the tension and danger of what she is going through.
  • Like she is some crazy psycho, scanning for danger, and triggers to make her go off the deep end.

She mirrors…she just mirrors” her dad’s behavior, Brannan says. She can’t get Katie to stop picking at the sores on her legs, sores she digs into her own skin with anxious little fingers.

  •  The claim that this is a child mirroring the behavior of her father sounds like  pure speculation to me.
  • Maybe she is itching due to a rash, right/

skyblue

PTSD is a disease most commonly found in soldiers or people who have been through extremely traumatic experiences.

The old lady counting her change is something a normal person would not think twice about. Instead it causes Brennan’s ears to ring describing the infuriating incident.

With the comment, “The lack of definitive tests for the former, undertesting for the latter, underreporting, under- or over-misdiagnosing of both” Mclelland repeats the prefixes to emphasize how neglected the syndrome is.

Analogy claim: McClelland uses the analogy of a murderer in the  home at night with the electricity out to convey the anxiety and nervousness the PTSD patient feels all the time.

McClelland suggests that a “small town in the southwest corner of Alabama, [as] quiet as a morgue . . .[with ] the cat padding around . . . [where] the air conditioner whooshes, a clock ticks, ” might make someone go crazy.Is that what Brannan really has, and not PTSD?

Definition claim: The word coward is an insult about weakness. Calling a soldier with PTSD a coward shows the ignorance people have about the disease and its seriousness.

Definition claim: Doctors have to go on hunches and symptomology rather than definitive evidence [to diagnose PTSD]. And the fact that the science hasn’t fully caught up with the suffering shows how mysterious the disease is.

Definition claim: Some claim that PTSD is not just an incident that happens to an individual; it’s contagious and affects everyone it contacts. Brannan and Katie exhibit the symptoms of the disease because, as Caleb’s wife and daughter, they spend the most time with him.

 

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Proposal +10 — Entendu

Free Heroin to Battle Addiction

Background: Vancouver is a hub for heroin addicts due to the fact that heroin is often imported there.  The city opened a clinic in which they give out free heroin with clean needles to help the addicts live more “normal” lives.  This clinic stops heroin related crimes, such as robberies due to needing money to buy more drugs.  They also benefit through clean needles, meaning less cases of AIDS and other diseases caused by dirty needles.

How I Intend to Use it: I want to use this for a basic overview of what my paper will be about.  This article gives a basic understanding of what is going on in this situation.  The article focuses mostly on the benefits of the heroin clinic but also some of the clear downsides.

Why Doctors are Giving Heroin to Heroin Addicts

Background: This article shows where the idea came from and why it is effective.  It demonstrates that they are using it to wean people off of heroin, since other attempts at cleanses have failed.

How I Intend to Use it: I intend to use this article to give the background of the whole concept in general.  This article showed how it can work and that it has worked before.  It is a good article that can be used to strengthen my whole argument since it touches on many aspects of the concept of giving heroin to heroin addicts.

The Only Place They’ll Inject You With Heroin for Free

Background: The article tells about people that go to this clinic and how it has affected their lives as well as how it can have an impact on the area as a whole.  The clinic gives clean syringes as well as pure heroin.  The theory is that it will decrease the spread of diseases such as Hepatitis and HIV/AIDS.

How I Intend To Use it: I Intend to use this article by showing the effects a free heroin society might have.  This can show why people thought it was a good idea in the first place. I believe this article will be useful because it also gives statistics and how the free heroin compares to other things used for heroin addicts such as methadone clinics.

Vancouver study claims benefits to prescribing heroin to addicts

Background: This article gives facts about what has occurred because of this free heroin initiative.  There is also claims from critics saying that it is a bad idea.  The article provides points and counter points to the whole concept as well as a study on whether or not its working.

How I Intend To Use it: I can use this article to introduce arguments against my point and disprove them.  I can also use it for an explanation about how the system all works.  I can back up my argument using a study from this article.

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Critical Reading– betterthanyou

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Critical Reading Deadline

At about 10am today, WED FEB 18, many but not all of you have posted your Critical Reading assignments, evaluations of the definition/category claims made in “Is PTSD Contagious?”

At this moment, the roster looks like this:

Got ‘Em

  • MoneyTrees
  • CasperTheGhost
  • skyblue
  • juggler
  • Bglunk
  • Hashmeesh
  • Thegreatestpenn
  • CptPooStain
  • albert
  • tagfcomp2
  • thatdude

Need ‘Em

  • betterthanyou
  • brett
  • cypher
  • mopar
  • entendu
  • kidhanekoma
  • madewithrealginger
  • qdoba
  • YouDontKnowWhoIAm
  • Sall
  • taddo

Some “delinquents” in the Need ‘Em list probably posted but didn’t categorize. If that describes you, please categorize your post as A06: Critical Reading, and check your username below the Author category, so that your post will appear in the feed. Thanks.

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Critical Reading-thatdude

PTSD was once thought only as an illness which came about when a veteran would return home from war.  Can PTSD really branch out an infect the wives and children of the sickly veterans also as well? Mac McClelland the author of “Is PTSD Contagious?” states that this scary theory might actually be true.

This theory is visual in  the situation Katie and Caleb Vines have  with their daughter Brannan, who is  developing  the same traits as her father, whom has PTSD. I believe Brannan acquired these traits from her father returning from war while she was so young. She was learning how to be an actual human and function normally as we all do, but a solder is trained differently. From her being around Caleb and learning his mannerism she slowly began to gain the traits of PTSD.

With Caleb having outbreaks  of stimulating sensations and range he seems to be able to be seen in society as a “normal crazy veteran” but when it happens to a young girl it all changes. When you see a girl under go the same symptoms as her father does, it begins to harm  her safety and well-being. Such as for when Brannan became angry, lost control, and  attacked an elder lady.

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Critical Reading–tagfcomp2

The article, “Is PTSD Contagious?,” by Mac McClelland, advances the argument that spouses and children of returning veterans develop the same mental and emotional symptoms as the traumatized vets.

The author specifically selected the word “contagious” for the title of her article. However, is the term “contagious” an appropriate claim when dealing with mental illness? This terminology could be described as offensive to many people who believe mental illness shouldn’t be downgrade, and compared to a spreading cold-like sickness. Mental illnesses such as anxiety, depression, and eating disorders aren’t contagious and are serious issues that shouldn’t be undermined.

The author incorporates the repeated phrase, “Brannan Vines has never been to war,” to focus on the effects of secondhand Post Traumatic Stress Disorder occurring in the family. Brannan Vines is married to Caleb Vines, a war veteran who served his time in Iraq twice, as a designated marksman. The phrase states that Brannan hasn’t physically experienced the traumatic events that her husband has from war. However, she’s adopted similar PTSD characteristics as her husband. These symptoms include: adrenaline-sharp ability to quickly scan for danger, super stimuli-sensitive, hyper vigilance, and hyperawareness. Caleb has returned home from Iraq for many years now, but still experiences detailed flashbacks, hyper vigilance, reoccurring nightmares, and chronic emotional pain. His symptoms also include: losing the ability to focus, decreased sexual desire, memory loss and severe brain damage. Caleb typically spends his days buried in his bedroom for up to 20 hours, battling his own thoughts in hopes of forgetting his disturbing past experiences. Caleb feels like a burden to his family, especially his wife, and questions why she doesn’t leave him already. The author refers back to the couple’s relationship several times to not only show how the family is struggling with Caleb’s PTSD symptoms, but with the added stress of balancing a romantic relationship too.

Brannan Vines has suffered emotionally and mentally as well, caring for her husband’s needs and raising their young daughter, Katie. The depressing, stressful environment that’s inhabited the once joyful Vine home, has affected every family member. Brannan is constantly on alert, and finds tasks that once seemed simple, to now be challenging because of these secondhand PTSD symptoms. The simple act of using a washing machine is now an adrenaline-pumping, intense task. Katie Vines looks like the typical kindergarten student to most outsiders, but the people who are close to her, acknowledge a significant change in personality. Katie has been acting naughty in school, and speaking of unusual, violent topics for her age. Brannan tries to scold her daughter for bad behavior, but how can she blame her daughter for acting out when her child’s constantly exposed to a negative atmosphere at home? Katie is experiencing secondhand PTSD symptoms.

Although Brannan maintains a complicated, busy schedule with her own family, she still reaches out to help other veteran families in need. Brannan Vines is an inspiring, selfless woman, who puts other’s needs before her own. The Department of Veteran Affairs, also where Brannan works, tries to help veterans and their families, but still lacks research and resources. Many places dedicated to helping veterans ironically aren’t able to pay for the medical resources, such as therapy, that most veterans suffering with PTSD need.

A VA nurse once said to Brannan after seeing Caleb, “I guess we’re just used to dealing with people with more severe injuries.” This quote shows the amount of knowledge the VA is lacking, considering Caleb is a severe case… and he got rejected for treatment. The author’s placement of this example is significantly useful. The whole article focuses on the family’s struggles coping with secondhand PTSD and Caleb’s firsthand symptoms. The audience has now become familiar with the family’s problems and feel sympathetic. Therefore, having an outside source tell the Vines family that Caleb isn’t a serious enough case, shows how much worse other people may be suffering from PTSD and produces stronger emotions from the audience.

The increase of veterans suffering from PTSD and their families from secondhand PTSD is prevalent in today’s society and on the rise. Brannan Vines and many others are desperately searching for help and need others’ support. However, Mac McClelland could make her viewpoint more reputable by not using the term “contagious” when describing PTSD.

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Critical Reading – albert

In the article “Is PTSD Contagious?” by Mac McClelland, the experiences of the families with veterans with post traumatic stress disorder (PTSD) is the central topic. The author writes about the effects on the families of the veterans and how the family members end up having PTSD symptoms, but where the trauma is the diagnosed veteran.

McClelland story introduce the readers to the Vines, where the wife Branna Vines is experiencing “hyperawareness, hypervigilance, adrenaline-sharp quick-scanning for dange” (McClelland); however, Branna has never been in the battlefield as her husband Caleb Vines. Interesting points about the article is that the Vines had a enormous weeding where “there were 500 people at the ceremony” and “even the mayor was there” (McClelland), for an article about families of veterans with PSTD the weeding night of the family seems irrelevant. Nevertheless, when the author writes “103,200, or 228,875, or 336,000Americans who served in Iraq or Afghanistan and came back with PTSD” and “115,000 to 456,000 with traumatic brain injury”(McClelland), the differentiation of the numbers is so large that McClelland might be assuming that not all cases are produced by the war experience. Therefore, for the Vines the disorder might have been produced by a lost of wealth, for instance wealth which was present at the time of the wedding. Additionally, according to the author, Caleb says “somebody at the VA told me, ‘Kids in Congo and Uganda don’t have PTSD,'” making more clear the idea that PTSD is not always war related in soldiers.

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