Definition Essay- Hashmeesh

Is It Really Treatment

The city of Vancouver is a beautiful city, but it is also a port for drugs. The main drug being sold is heroin. For years now, Vancouver has been trying to treat and fix the heroin problem. They’ve set up a project called Insite, where addicts can go and shoot up heroin with clean syringes and medical supervision. While at the clinic police aren’t allowed to arrest the addicts while using. The city has since added to the project. Addicts are not only given medical supervision and clean instruments, but are also being given free heroin. The city claims that if the addicts are given a clean/safe environment and free heroin, then they won’t have to go out and commit crimes to obtain the drug in the streets.

The National Insitiute on Drug Abuse states that drug addiction treatment is the intent to help addicted individuals stop compulsive drug seeking and use. Vancouver claims that Insite is a treatment program, but the definition of drug addiction treatment clearly states that in order to be treatment it has to help addicts stop using. If you go by definition then the program isn’t drug treatment. The addicts that partake in this program can’t get over their addiction if they are being given heroin to shoot up. Instead Insite is sustaining their addiction.

“Merriam-Webster defines sustain as to provide what is needed for (something or someone) to exist, continue, etc” (Webster). Insite is sustaining their addiction with free/clean instruments, medical supervision/care, no legal punishment and actual drugs. There was a patient that is apart of the program that was asked on video if she would ever stop using. She answered saying that she will continue to use for the rest of her life. She says that the drug has become apart of her every day life. Insite just now makes it easier for her and other patients to continue using.

Also in the video is a man who is also apart of the program. It is stated that he and all the other patients now need heroin to function normally in society. After interviewing the man, the reporter goes on to say that even though he seems to function normally it is still obvious that the man is high on drugs. A definition of a drug is a medicine or other substance that has a physiological effect when ingested or introduced to the body. Someone couldn’t possibly act normal and be a regular contributor to society if they are physiologically impaired.

Vancouver isn’t treating the users addiction. They are just sustaining there addiction. In order to truly be treated the users would have to stop using and seeking heroin. The program is just sustaining the addiction.

Work Cited

“Vancouver Combats Heroin by Giving Its Addicts the Best Smack in the World.” Public Radio International. N.p., n.d. Web. 01 Mar. 2015. <http://www.pri.org/stories/2015-02-04/vancouver-combats-heroin-giving-its-addicts-best-smack-world&gt;.

“Principles of Drug Addiction Treatment: A Research-Based Guide (Third Edition).” What Is Drug Addiction Treatment? N.p., n.d. Web. 27 Feb. 2015. <http://www.drugabuse.gov/publications/principles-drug-addiction-treatment-research-based-guide-third-edition/frequently-asked-questions/what-drug-addiction-treatment&gt;.

Merriam-Webster. Merriam-Webster, n.d. Web. 01 Mar. 2015. <http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/sustain&gt;.

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Definition Essay – juggler

How The Memory Affects Eyewitness Testimony

As our understanding of memory improves, new techniques to enhance their accuracy are making it possible for prosecutors to get reliable accounts of crimes from eyewitnesses.

Memory operates in stages and is affected by both system and estimator variables. “System variables” are those factors that the criminal justice system can influence, typically involving the actions of police (e.g., feedback and methods of eliciting the initial identification). “Estimator variables” are those factors that inherent in the event, such as the environmental conditions at the time and the characteristics of the witness and the perpetrator over which the criminal justice system has no control but that may have a substantial effect on the reliability of the identification.  

The scientific research on memory and eyewitness identification has both grown and matured over the past thirty years; there is now general scientific consensus on many areas affecting eyewitness identification, consensus that requires a change in the way courts, counsel, and police deal with the evidence. Scientists generally agree that “memory does not operate like a videotape” but rather is a “constructive, dynamic, and selective process.”

If memory errors  only affected our personal past, that would be bad enough. But the problems created by our lack in memory recollections affect all of society.  More than 75,000 prosecutions every year are based entirely on the recollections of others. While perjury is a felony, the overwhelming majority of eyewitness errors are not intentional mistakes.   However, they are the inevitable side effects of the remembering process.

In recent years, neuroscientists have documented how these mistakes happen. It turns out that the act of brining the past to the surface actually changes the memory itself. Although we have long imagined our memories as a stable form of information, a data file directly into the circuits of the brain, that persistence is an illusion. In reality, our recollections are always being altered, the details of the past warped by our present feelings and knowledge. The more you remember an event, the less reliable that memory becomes. This takes us back to the problem of eyewitness testimony. Eyewitnesses are repeatedly asked to recall what they saw, but their answers are inevitably influenced by the questions being asked.

Such errors often have tragic or irreversible consequences. According to the Innocence Project, a legal advocacy group, about 75% of false convictions that are later overturned are based on faulty eyewitness testimony.  Can anything be done to improve the situation? In a new paper by Neil Brewer, a psychologist at Flinders University in Australia, the answer is a resounding yes. Dr. Brewer focused on the police lineup, in which witnesses are asked to pick out a suspect from a collection of similar looking individuals.

Generally, witnesses are encouraged to take their time and carefully consider each possible suspect. But Dr. Brewer states, “that strong memory traces are easier to access than weak and mistaken ones, which is why he only gave his witnesses two seconds to make up their minds.” During his study he asked each witness to estimate how confident they were about the suspects they identified, rather than insisting on a simple yes-no answer.

To test this procedure, Dr. Brewer and his colleagues asked 905 volunteers to watch a series of short films showing such crimes as shoplifting and car theft. The subjects then looked at 12 portraits, only one of which was the actual suspect. According to Dr. Brewer’s data, his version of the lineup led to a large boost in accuracy, with improvements in eyewitness performance ranging from 21% to 66%. Even when subjects were quizzed a week later, those who were forced to choose quickly remained far more trustworthy.

The issue is that, when it comes to human memory, more deliberation is often dangerous. Instead of simply assessing our familiarity with a suspect’s face, we begin searching for clues and guidance. Sometimes this involves picking the person who looks the most suspicious, even if we’ve never seen him before, or being swayed by the subtle hints of police officers and lawyers. As a result, we talk ourselves into having a memory that doesn’t actually exist.

Fact, we can send a man to the moon, right?  So, prosecutors can work closer with memory experts and nail down the most accurate way to extract a point in time memory recall from an eyewitness.  Prosecutors can make simple enhancements to the criminal judicial system for a more reliable outcome from eyewitness testimony.   Unless we are ruthlessly skeptical of the past, we will continue to confuse fact and fiction, and innocent will be sent to jail.

    Work Cited

“Eyewitness Misidentification.” – The Innocence Project. N.p., n.d. Web. 09 Mar. 2015. “Eyewitness Misidentification”

Dorf, Michael C. “FindLaw Legal Commentary.” FindLaw’s Writ. N.p., Wed May 2001. Web. 28 Feb. 2015. “Find Legal Law Commentary

Hartnett, Kevin. “How to Make Eyewitness Evidence More Reliable – The Boston Globe.” BostonGlobe.com. N.p., 27 Feb. 2015. Web. 28 Feb. 2015. “How To Make Eyewitness Testimony More Reliable”

“Memory.” Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, n.d. Web. 27 Feb. 2015. “Memory”

“How To Improve Eyewitness Testimony | WIRED.” Wired.com. Conde Nast Digital, n.d. Web. 24 Mar. 2015. “How To Improve Eyewitness Testimony”

 

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Definition Essay—MoneyTrees4

It can be said that any amount of multivitamins is an excess because they are not conducive to a person’s health.  This can apply to my topic of the true usefulness of multivitamins because it is becoming more believed that the supplements are useless. If this is true, then perhaps we can also say that not only are they useless but can be detrimental to one’s health. Researchers are saying that any amount of multivitamins is an excess because we get all the vitamins and minerals from the foods we eat. When trying to figure out how much of these multivitamins we should take if any, we encounter words such as useful, health, and deficiency.

Now let’s say, contrary to growing belief, multivitamins do have some use. It can be disputed how much a person needs. Of course it will differ with age, gender, and other health characteristics.  What is deemed to be an excess to one person may be just right or not enough for another. In the case of multivitamins however, the only way we can compare what is too much for certain people is through multiple tests on their health. With that said, it is not a conscious decision on what may be too much for our bodies or what may not be enough. It would in-fact be easier to define a deficiency. With a deficiency in something, it is likely will see negative effects before an excess.

Nevertheless, one can evaluate how they feel after taking a certain supplement or eating a certain food. For example, taking a supplement for 30 days and recording how it makes you feel, followed by cutting the multivitamin cold turkey and recording how you feel. It is more likely for an adult to try this method than a child. The reason for this can be either because children are less likely to be health conscious; an adult is more likely to have some kind of disorder that prohibits them from eating too much unhealthy products. Regardless of the reason the point is that what is too much for one person can be regular or perfectly normal for another and vice versa.

With that said, an excess can be something tangible or otherwise, that is more than enough for a person. Whether or not this person realizes something is an excess such as in this case with supplements is irrelevant.

In order for us to evaluate the meaning of one word, there may be others that have to be clarified. When we look at what an excess is, we also should look at words such as proper, useful and health. These tie into an excess because in a way, a person’s point of view on the word can be related to how useful they believe something to be. We can also define usefulness as being of service or helpful. In the case of multivitamins however, the argument is that they are useless so any amount is an excess. The definition of proper easily varies from culture to culture, household to household, city to city etc. The important thing when arguing a definition is to remember the different point of views.

Works Cited

Dictionary.com. Dictionary.com, n.d. Web. 28 Feb. 2015. <http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/excess?s=t&gt;.

Goodman, Brenda From. “Experts: Don’t Waste Your Money on Multivitamins – WebMD.” WebMD. WebMD, 13 Dec. 2013. Web. 26 Feb. 2015. <http://www.webmd.com/vitamins-and-supplements/news/20131216/experts-dont-waste-your-money-on-multivitamins&gt;.

Gavura, Scott. “More Evidence That Routine Multivitamin Use Should Be Avoided « Science-Based Medicine.” More Evidence That Routine Multivitamin Use Should Be Avoided « Science-Based Medicine. N.p., 19 Dec. 2013. Web. 28 Feb. 2015. <http://www.sciencebasedmedicine.org/more-evidence-that-routine-multivitamin-use-should-be-avoided/&gt;.

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White Paper-Sallcomp2

Leading Apple With Steve Jobs: Management Lessons from a Controversial Genius

Content Description

  • Apple compared to other brands
  • Consumers relation with the technology: Steve’s mission is to make technology friendly and appealing to humans
  • Apple foundation:
  • What statement is apple based on: The two statements Apple premises were based on are: Achieve our goals is important to us; We are equally concerned the way we reach these goals.
  • Steve Jobs view in design: Design is not only how it looks but also how it works. Steve loved well designed cars. He even talked to Giorgetto Giugiaro (designer of Maseratti) about designs for Apple
  • Steve jobs organized his team as pirates: Steve’s magic was to work with people of Apple to create more artful products. Great product design would be key to get Apple selling again
  1. Working Hypothesis 1

If Apple didn’t have that elegance to the design of their products, it would’ve had the same attention that every other major tech companies have.

  1. Working Hypothesis 2

Despite the mass Apple loyal consumers, its products quality has a small impact on its success. Apple products are not technologically superior to every technology brand in the market right now.

  1. Topics For Smaller Paper

What does this mean for Apple in the future

This means that in the future, Apple inc. will have a big challenge in keeping their position on top. Technologically, big names like Samsung and Microsoft are already catching up on Apple in the market and Samsung is an even bigger company than Apple. Apple inc. only beats those companies because of their understanding of the modern adopted design. But if there’s anything that time taught us is that fashion is an art that changes momentarily. It’s an art that keeps evolving from the most daring abstracts, it’s not fashion if nobody tells you the piece is not ordinary. But with this generation growing, it won’t be very hard for other companies to find those kids that think totally out of the box, Apple called them “Pirates”

Is It Possible for Apple inc. to Dominate the Future Market?

Yes it could be a big possibility although it won’t be easy. As of now Apple being the company with user friendliest devices, might have a big competition with Google Glasses. Whom by name is obviously in direct skin contact with its users, so Apple had to come up with a wearable device too, and its called Apple Watch. Apple inc have been keeping up with the consumers trends, this is the reason of their strong consumer loyalty. With such consumer loyalty, A product development or market penetration won’t be difficult.

 

  1. Current State Of Research Paper

I’m still developing the research paper, but at this point I have some ideas that could work great with the paper and others I need to work in order to make them flow with the hypothesis.

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Agenda WED FEB 25

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Model Works Cited

Beginning with the Definition Essay, your Shorter Arguments and of course your Research Paper will have to include a Works Cited. Please understand this is different from a Bibliography, which identifies every source you consulted in your research. The Works Cited identifies only (this will sound so obvious!) works cited in this particular essay.

If you get your sources through the Rowan library databases, you can use Prof Search or RefWorks to produce automated Works Cited citations. A little experience with RefWorks will also accustom you to the mechanics of common citation types. But if you get stuck for a particular style, the Online Writing Lab (OWL) at Purdue offers a free online guide to citation.

Easier still than building your own citations with help from a manual are the automated Bibliography and Works Cited generators such as EasyBib, Citation Machine, and ETurabian.

A sample Works Cited follows.

Works Cited

Are you Eating Too Much Meat?Forbes. 24 March 2009. Web. 9 March 2011.

Teeth Show Fruit Was The Staple; No Exceptions Found.” The New York Times. The New York Times, 15 May 1979. 8-9 March 2011.

Meat.” WikiInvest. Web. 9 March 2011.

Study: vegan diets healthier for planet, people than meat diets.” The University of Chicago News Office. The University of Chicago, 13 April 2006. 8 March 2011.

Humans are Naturally Plant-Eaters (According to the Best Evidence: Our Bodies).” Vegetarian Guide. Michael Bluejay, September 2010. 8 March 2011.

How Meat Contributes to Global Warming.” Scientific American. Scientific American, 4 February 2009. 9 March 2011.

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Riddle: What is Rape?

What is death?
What is life?
What is abortion?
What is rape?

These sound like silly questions we could answer without thinking or by flipping open a good dictionary, but in fact death,life, abortion, and rape (among countless others) are terms we negotiate with our cultures. They have different meanings in different parts of the world. They change over time.

Who’s a liar? Someone who once lied?

Who’s a cheater? Someone who keeps a mistress? Someone who flirts with strangers? Someone who sleeps with hookers? Someone who has a long and emotionally deep relationship but no sex with someone other than his spouse?

Who’s a gangster? Someone who belongs to a gang, or someone who acts aggressively in the neighborhood?

Over the years, and at different times in different cultures, rape (of a woman by a man, let’s keep things simple) has meant, and in some places still means:

  1. Property damage (the father was deprived of the virginity or purity of his daughter).
  2. Adultery (the man was blameless; the woman was guilty of adultery; her consent or refusal was irrelevant).
  3. A proposal of marriage (the rapist had to atone by paying a fine to the father and marrying the daughter).
  4. Abduction (the word rape and the word kidnap meant more or less the same thing).
  5. Consensual sex (if the rape victim got pregnant, she wasn’t taken against her will).
  6. Misdemeanor (while it might be a serious crime to rape a nun, forcing sex on a prostitute was no crime, and statutory rape of a minor was also not criminal if the girl was “impure”).
  7. Legal for 13-year-olds (England’s King Edward I set the age of consent at 12).
  8. Always legal for the husband (until 1993 in North Carolina, no wife could ever legally refuse her husband).
  9. Legal for slaveholders (in fact, in America, white men were not prosecuted for sex crimes against black women, slave or free, until long after abolition).
  10. Only if proved with physical evidence (in the 18th and 19th centuries, this usually meant a broken hymen or presence of semen; now it means a positive rape kit: progress?).
  11. “Absolute rape” or “legitimate rape” (Missouri Rep. Todd Akins echoed this one last in 2012 when he said a woman who didn’t enjoy the sex couldn’t conceive).
  12. A Motionless Needle (19th-century gynecologist Dr. Lawson Tait famously said, “You cannot thread a moving needle,” meaning that no woman could claim to have been forced; if she had moved, it wouldn’t have happened).
  13. Carnal Knowledge (yes, it’s a Jack Nicholson movie from 1971; it’s also the FBI definition: “the carnal knowledge of a woman, forcibly and against her will”).
  14. Your definition, please. Surely we can do better than this. Use the Reply field below to craft your Definition. We will review the entries together until we craft one that satisfies us.Several factors need to be addressed in your definition:
    • The rapist can be male or female.
    • The victim can be male or female.
    • The “couple” can be friends, strangers, lovers, spouses, family members, or engaged in a commercial transaction.
    • Various body parts can be involved.
    • Objects other than body parts can be involved.
    • An age difference between the participants may change the rules.
    • The power of one participant to compel sex from the other may take many forms.
    • The participants are not necessarily in their right minds, old enough to consent, possessed of all their faculties, capable of reasoning, unimpaired, conscious . . . .
    • Good luck.
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Model of a Definition (Category) Essay

Before you begin to write your own, you’ll want to review the essential qualities of a good Definition Essay.

1. It’s an argument.
I’ve told you before that all writing is argument, but now is always a good time to remind you. Our intuition might tell us that a Definition Essay is a simple stating of the facts of what a thing is or isn’t. But if that were true, we’d hardly need lawyers at all. Whole libraries have been filled with arguments about whether a particular judicial process is or is not an example of “due process” or “equal protection under the law.” Those categories sound clear enough, but deciding whether individual cases qualify as members of the class is always up for debate.

2. It has real-world relevance.
The dictionary is almost useless in defining what words and concepts mean in society. Because the model essay below is about gay marriage, I looked up the definition of marriage in a 1993 dictionary and found it quite helpless. In several entries, it sometimes refers to unions of husband and wife; sometimes to a special social and legal relationship between men and women for the foundation of a family; sometimes merely to an intimate or close union.

None of these will help us legislate whether same gender marriages should be permitted because, as a society, we get to decide what constitutes a “special social and legal relationship” and who can make one, just as we get to decide what constitutes “the foundation of a family.” After all, we don’t take away the marriage licenses of couples who don’t procreate, even by choice.

3. It often requires defining several terms.
In the above, we need to clarify not just marriage, but social relationship, legal relationship, and family. In the model below, our quest to define the rights of gays seeking to marry sends us in search of good definitions for

  • protected class,
  • insular minorities,
  • laws based on gender,
  • laws based on sex,
  • invidious discrimination,
  • defining characteristics,
  • political vulnerability, and
  • fundamental nature.

After all that, the model below still doesn’t define marriage, let alone gay marriage. It doesn’t try to. It doesn’t say gay marriage should be embraced. It doesn’t say gays are entitled to all the privileges and considerations of marriage. Its narrower argument is that, whatever gay marriage is, gays belong to a class of citizens entitled to special consideration to determine whether depriving them of the right to marry is unconstitutional.

And that’s a worthwhile definition essay!

In red below are the specific claims relevant to a definition of a protected class that deserves heightened scrutiny and the argument that gays seeking to marry belong to that class.

New York Times Editorial
March 23, 2013

Heightened Scrutiny

One of the central questions in the two gay marriage cases to be argued before the Supreme Court this week is whether gays and lesbians are a protected class under the Constitution. Under longstanding principles, government actions that fall heavily on “discrete and insular minorities” historically subject to prejudice and stigma are to be given particular scrutiny.

The 3.4 percent of Americans who identify as gay, lesbian, bisexual and transgender clearly qualify as this kind of minority. Laws classifying individuals based on sexual orientation — the anti-gay-marriage initiative in California called Proposition 8 and the federal Defense of Marriage Act — must be given heightened scrutiny.

Justice Ruth Bader Ginsburg, then the foremost advocate for gender equality, swayed the court 40 years ago to adopt that standard for gender-based distinctions. The court concludedthat classifications based upon sex” were “inherently suspect.” But it has not yet decided how to treat laws based on sexual orientation. The solicitor general and others argue persuasively that such laws require close review just as those based on gender do.

The United States Court of Appeals for the Second Circuit struck down the Defense of Marriage Act for defining marriage as between a man and a woman. The appeals court convincingly found that in focusing on sexual orientation, the act warranted heightened scrutiny under the test the Supreme Court established for gender-based laws — and that the statute was unconstitutional when reviewed closely. The test considers whether members of the group have experienced invidious discrimination; whether individuals can leave the group without losing a basic part of their identities; whether the group’s defining characteristic is relevant to its ability to contribute to society; and whether members can protect themselves in the political process.

Gays, lesbians, bisexuals and transgender people share a common “immutable” characteristic because their sexual orientation is fundamental to who they are and they have indisputably been discriminated against. Until a decade ago, the Supreme Court upheld state laws making “private sexual conduct” between people of the same sex a crime. In the five most recent years for which the government has data, through 2011, hate crimes in the United States fell by 19 percent. But hate crimes based on sexual orientation went up by 3 percent. The discrimination has nothing to do with the ability to contribute to society.

Finally, gays and lesbians, as a minority group, cannot protect themselves from discrimination in a political process governed by the majority. If they had power, Proposition 8 and the Defense of Marriage Act would never have passed, nor would the laws currently on the books in 39 states that specifically restrict marriage to opposite-sex couples.

As the brief for the United States said in the Defense of Marriage Act case, “This is the rare circumstance in which a faithful application of the court’s established criteria compels applying heightened scrutiny to an additional classification.” Neither of the laws in the two cases before the court can withstand this serious constitutional examination.

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A06: Definition or Category Essay

Definition (or Categorical) Argument

Your first Short Argument, due SUN MAR 01, will make a definition or categorical argument essential to your Research Position Paper, which itself will be due before you know it (first draft, SUN APR 26). You’ll write three short papers in preparation for that longer assignment, each one proving something essential about your Research Argument.

This first Definition or Categorical Argument will define a term essential to proving your thesis. Understandably, you may still be refining your thesis and gathering valuable sources, still determining the exact parameters of your argument. That is understood. It is also understood that not everything can wait until the end of the semester, and that writing and refining a research paper is shooting at a moving target. What you’ll do in your short arguments may be more or less relevant to your final argument depending on how little or how much your thesis changes between now and SUN APR 26. What you’ll aim at in your short paper is today’s target, however shaped, wherever placed (and since it’s moving, you’ll have to aim a bit ahead of it).

Works Cited
You’ll need to cite two sources for this first formal argument, which you may or may not already have described in your Proposal and 5 Sources. You’ll produce your first Works Cited for this assignment too. Check the links you provide to be sure they lead back to a page we can all access (even if it’s the page in the databases that “launches” the actual document).

I’ve posted a Model Works Cited and linked it to the A06: Definition Essay category and the Grammar and Punctuation category.

How Can A Definition Be An Argument?
Good question. Let’s say we’re reading an essay by a columnist who has just had to have her apartment wired for internet service for the first time, after years of casually, almost thoughtlessly, logging on to the non-password-protected networks of subscribers in neighboring apartments. She’s never thought of herself as a thief. She’s never thought much about her actions at all; as long as service was available, and free, and she could access it without paying a service provider, she did so, perhaps with gratitude, perhaps with a sense of entitlement.

When the day came that her neighbors locked her out with passwords or moved or migrated to smart phones and unplugged themselves from their own networks, this columnist reports, she awakened from her mindlessness and faced a new reality: the internet isn’t free in the way she’d grown accustomed to thinking of it. It’s a valuable service that costs billions to the providers who expect to be paid for it. She hadn’t been merely sharing what was offered out of generosity to the world. She’d been stealing. She had to re-define what “theft” meant and what “free internet” meant. The internet is a commercial service that somebody is buying (in this case her neighbors) and sharing with others. If they’re sharing willingly, the service is a gift or an inducement. If they’re sharing unwillingly, or without knowing they’re sharing, it’s theft of service.

A one-sentence definition of “free internet” from the author’s new perspective is a tiny little definition essay all by itself: The internet is free to anybody whose conscience doesn’t prohibit her from stealing service from somebody who’s paying for it.

We could argue about her definition. And that’s the point. Definition is argument. Your definition essay will argue for a particular definition and establish the terms under which the rest of your proof will be conducted.

As you work on your own research projects, stay alert to the terms you think are perfectly understood, but which in fact require your readers’ cooperation. For further clarification, here’s an example of how short arguments must be proved before long arguments can be considered complete.

An Essay Desperately In Need of a Definition

Here’s an example you can examine in detail by reading the actual source. It’s about public sector pensions, a topic being hotly debated all across the country, and which has been particularly contentious in New Jersey since the current Governor took charge of a state scrambling desperately to balance its budget in a time of fiscal crisis.

The story is that former New Jersey Governor Christine Todd Whitman took money from the public employees’ pension fund and used it to lower taxes, then borrowed money and gambled it in the stock market to try to repay what she’d taken. Read the article “But the Pension Fund Was Just Sitting There,” and then come back.

The article makes a persuasive argument that public sector employees are not responsible for current budget shortfalls. What it desperately needs, though, if it wants to make its broader point—that the state of New Jersey owes money back to the pension fund—is a clear definition of the state’s fiduciary responsibility to that fund.

  • Is the state obligated to keep those funds locked in a box, free from deflation or loss of any kind?
  • Or is the state obligated to invest that money in instruments that will grow the money to pay future obligations?
  • If so, is the state allowed to choose the stock market to invest in?
  • In other words, did Governor Whitman play within the rules, or did she steal from the employees?

Notice we’re not defining the term pension fund, although the term might be a good candidate for a Definition Essay for a different research project. We’re not defining state, or fiduciary, or the fund. What requires clarification is the concept people like to toss around when they’re debating the topic: The state’s responsibility. “The Governor thumbed her nose at the state’s fiduciary responsibility to the pension fund,” they say, without ever defining that responsibility. Defining the state’s responsibility (or identifying what sort of responsibilities fall into the category: the state’s fiduciary responsibility to its employee’s pension funds), is a good example of a Definition Essay.

ASSIGNMENT SPECIFICS

  • Write your first Shorter Argument paper.
  • The paper will take the form of a Definition (or Category) Argument, as described above.
  • For example, define a term such as stem cell not just biologically, but also politically, since people use the term for advance particular social agendas.
  • Or, for example, define a concept such as the perfect study to prove that violent game play causes players to act violently, since only when the perfect study is defined can the author test existing studies for compliance.
  • Define your term(s) or concept(s) thoroughly but concisely in 1,000 words. Padding with wasted words is prohibited.
  • Include Works Cited.
  • Title your post Definition Essay—Author Name.
  • Publish your definition essay in the A06: Definition Essay category.

GRADE DETAILS

  • Due midnight Sunday (11:59 pm) SUN MAR 01.
  • Customary late penalties. (0-24 hours 10%) (24-48 hours 20%) (48+ hours, 0 grade)
  • Portfolio Essay
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White Paper – madewithrealginger

CONTENT DESCRIPTIONS

  • Bitcoins: What Are They?
  • Benefits and Advantages
  • Risks and Weaknesses
  • The Crash of 2013
  • Lack of ‘Federal Reserve’ or FDIC
  • Uses of BitCoin
    • Legal
    • Illegal
  • Universally Transferable
  • Should It Be Acceptable?

1a. WORKING HYPOTHESIS 1

We can try to predict the movement of BitCoin for our own benefit, and we may have success from time to time. But that’s merely a coincidence. At the end of the day, none of us really know whether the price per coin is going to rise or fall. It is for this reason, that investing our money in BitCoin seems foolish and overly optimistic at best.

1b. WORKING HYPOTHESIS 2

Because bitcoins are completely virtual and only exist online, they are very difficult to trace. This gives bitcoin owners the freedom to spend their coins however and wherever they want. It wouldn’t pose much of a problem if everyone spent their bitcoins legally. But the astounding lack of security presents a golden opportunity to criminals. Drug dealers can now distribute large quantities of the product online with virtually no risk. These new opportunities obviously present big problems and bring up the question of whether or not bitcoins should be legal.

2. TOPICS FOR SMALLER PAPERS

I’m not really sure I understand this section of the White Paper.

3. CURRENT STATE OF THE RESEARCH PAPER

I’m still not 100% sure that I can accurately  and knowledgeably discuss my topic. Partly because there is just a ton of information about the subject, but mostly because I haven’t decided on a specific thesis yet. I don’t want to commit to one specific idea just yet because I don’t to realize in 6 weeks that I made a wrong decision. I think that if I find a way to balance several different concepts and opinions, I’ll be able to write a successful paper.

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