Research Position – thatdude

The True Meaning Behind the Marshmallow Test

Children now a day are tested in so many different ways for different disorders or problems, but do we really know what the results actually resemble. For example what does the famous Marshmallow Test really show in its results?  This simple test created by psychologist Dr. Walter Mischel includes a child being given a marshmallow from an instructor and in return if the child doesn’t eat the treat within 15 minuets he or she will be given an additional treat.  So as we can guess some kids waited and others did not but it wasn’t the results that aren’t clear, it’s the meaning of them.

Life throws challenges at a single person each day, but with the help of self-control we can accomplish these problems. There are not a lot of test that can explore a person’s ability to resist temptation, but the Marshmallow test certainly does.  Dr. Walter Mischel states that the results show a child’s strength  to control its impulses when confronted with a stressful situation. By the child not eating the treat and showing techniques to delay gratification, a reflection of how he or she will act later on in life in a stressful, is shown “I was watching this miracle that occurs when our kids … really begin spontaneously to show dramatic changes in their ability to control their impulses,”(Hadad).

This seems logical and accurate opposed to other theories from scientists stating “longitudinal studies show is that children who come from an environment where they have learned to be more trusting have better life outcomes”(Elharo). This theory is illogical because children grow up in all different environments that have opposing types of living styles which conflicts with their everyday reasoning. For example a child whom comes from a suburban community might trust others because his environment is small and everyone in his community is trustworthy. While a child from an urban community choses to trust few people because of the lack of trust in his large environment. It all depends on how your child is raised and the influence of its environment when it comes to how easily someone will trust another, not a marshmallow test. This would simply  be the wrong test for trust issues unless you pick children from the same neighborhood or community.

The right test would be “Rational snacking” done by Celeste Kidd, Holly Palmeri, and Richard N. Aslin from the University of Rochester. This a test where children were separated into two group to do art, where the instructor would give them some supplies and say he will return with more in 15 mins. In one case he did and in other he didn’t. Following this they took the same kids and instructor in each group and preformed the Marshmallow test. Now we can see why it becomes a trust issue problem because the children already have met the instructor once and saw if he was true to his word or not. Sadly this is not the same as the original Marshmallow test so trust doesn’t get tested, but  self-control is.

This is important for a parent to know so a child can achieve help to gain  self-control “I realized that I didn’t have a clue about what was going on in my children’s heads that allowed these changes to occur and that’s what I wanted to understand.”(Hadad). With a parent having their child placed into PROGRAMS that build up his her ability to control their impulses they are easy placing him on better path to succeed in life. Now it is helpful for a parent to realize this problem ,but it is vital for a child to realize also. Once a child can realize how to delay gratification the sooner he or she is  on a better track to succeed “Preschoolers with good self-control sacrifice the immediate pleasure of a chewy marshmallow in order to indulge in two marshmallows at some later point. Ex-smokers forfeit the enjoyment of a cigarette in order to experience good health and avoid an increased risk of lung cancer in the future”(Delaying). Results show the children who had enough self-control to not eat the first treat had higher grades, were not as addictive, and also were able to hold down more jobs compared to the children whom eaten the treat.

The two main aspects of the results of the Marshmallow Test reveal a child’s delay gratification and self-control. Now the importance of this test is beneficial for a child’s development for example when Dr. Walter Mischel stated “He learned that the techniques that children showed to delay gratification would have a profound effect on them for decades”(Hadad). The sooner a parent realizes that their child lacks skills in either of these subjects are vital to the success of their offspring. If a child eats the treat without waiting he or she can easily receive help by the parent bringing them to a  skill building class on self-control or to meet with a professional to learn aspects of how to control delay gratification such as to “use specific activities designed to teach self-regulation”(Clark), “use appropriate rewards”(Clark), or to simply just “take a break”(Clark).For the children whom already show signs of being able to control themselves the parent needs to stay on top of those attributes. Just because their child now has the skills to control themselves it doesn’t mean that over time those attributes won’t fade away. Once the parent builds on the skills it would advance the development of their offspring to a greater extent. Either way if a child fails the test or doesn’t there is a way to learn from the results, but first you need to know what they actually mean.

Work Cited

“Delaying Gratification.” Science 306.5695 (2004): 369l. Delaying Gratification. Web.

Elharo. “A New Interpretation of the Marshmallow Test.” – Less Wrong. N.p., 05 July 2013. Web. 02 Mar. 2015.

Hadad, Chuck. “What the ‘marshmallow Test’ Can Teach You about Your Kids – CNN.com.’ CNN. Cable News Network, 22 Dec.2014. Web. 02 Mar. 2015.

L, Clark .. “Teaching Your Child Self-Control Skills.” B E H AV I O R P R O B L E M S 2nd Edition (1996): n. pag. Behavior Problems. Clark.L, July-Aug. 1996. Web.

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Research Position — skyblue

How Live Robotic Elephants
Were Created

When we attend circuses, we can’t help but admire, even love, the beautiful animals we think are acting naturally. They’re not. The calm and docile animals in their cages, or dancing on tiptoe, were not born in the wild to take orders from humans. Circus animals are trained using abusive tactics to transform them into docile animals. Elephants are brutally broken in different ways to perform for the circuses. Sadly, knowing how they are “trained” ruins the fun of watching them perform. Even worse, we have to admit that our attendance at the performance is the cause of their suffering.

To most training is thought of in a positive light. For instance, when you train a dog you positively reinforce them to go to the bathroom outside. Dog trainers like Amy Jorgensen stand behind the idea of positive reinforcement. In “Positive Reinforcement and Negative Reinforcement in Dog Training,” Jorgensen explains that “trainers who use positive reinforcement, use rewards to encourage the dog to repeat a specific behavior. Rewards can be treats, affection or a toy. As soon as the dog does the desired behavior, the reward needs to be given.” The dog trainers praise the dog with love and affection when they do something correctly.

Although circus trainers pride themselves on using what they call positive reinforcement with the animals. It is in fact the opposite of the positive reinforcement method. In answer to frequently asked questions, the Ringling Bros. Circus claimed that their animals were “reinforced through a system of reward and repetition.” With elephants and other circus animals the training has to be extremely negative all the time because of their wild nature. Trainers need more than a treat and repetition to get wild animals, such as elephants, to stand on their hind legs and dance for an audience. We are beginning to dig deeper into these training practices and beginning to question what circus owners really believe is appropriate training.

In order to hold a successful circus the trainers must inflict p an extensive amount of pain and suffering onto the animals to keep the circuses successful. If elephants have to go through all that pain to be considered “trained” for the shows they are not being trained they are being tortured. They are taken away from their homeland, ripped from their mothers, isolated, and physically injured. This torture does not benefit the animal or make the animal a better elephant in any way shape or form, in fact injures the elephants. This “training” is a form of torture to get the animals to perform the way the circus or zoos want them to perform. Howard Chua-Eoan comments on the training in his article The Elephants Take A Bow, “What more and more people saw as the years went by– was the use of bullhooks. To keep the elephants marching in single file up to the park, trainers whacked them with the ugly metal talons.” Training—or torturing—the animals in this way takes away from what makes them beautiful and what we admire so much: their habitat, compassion, wildness, and freedom.

When they could no longer hide or justify abusing their elephants, Ringling Brothers eliminated all elephant acts from their circuses. The owner of the Ringling Bros., Kenneth Feld, announced that elephants would be eliminated from all circus shows by 2018. Ringling Bros. removing the acts is a way of them acknowledging the wrong they have done to these innocent animals. Charisse Jones reported for USA Today that when Feld was asked about the removal, he said, “When we did so, we knew we would play a critical role in saving the endangered Asian elephants for future generations, given how few Asian elephants are left in the wild. …This decision was not easy, but it is in the best interest of our company, our elephants and our customers.” From his statement above, Kenneth Feld shows remorse for the shrinking elephant population. His comment hints that the elephants from the show die from being “trained,” contributing the the endangered elephants.

It is almost impossible to get Ringling Bros. or their employees to expose the horrors that go on behind the scenes, because if they do they will be loosing out on huge profits that the injured elephants bring in. Thus, Ringling Bros. will always defend themselves and deny any allegations.But if their training process is humane and instructive, they could profit from opening the sessions to a paying audience.

Like many animal centers, the Ringling Bros. Greatest Show on Earth, claim that they treat elephants and all animals in the circus in a humane and loving way. On the Ringling Bros. website they explain the care of the animals as, “the animal care professionals at Ringling Bros. and Barnum & Bailey® believe that a positive, healthy environment is the only acceptable and successful method of working with animals.” They claim the only way to get the animals to perform successfully is to allow them time spent with their mother and reward them with positive phrases as they train. “Trainers teach animals routines that showcase their physical abilities and beauty, as well as their distinctive behaviors. Our training methods are based on reinforcement in the form of food rewards and words of praise,” they claim. They are very clear when they explain that each of the animals in the circus are thoroughly cared for and not abused in any way. When the circus trainers teach they young calves the routines they are, again according to Ringling Bros., “tailored to each animal’s natural abilities and individual preferences which we observe during their playtime.” Basically, Ringling Bros. is claiming that each of the elephants routines are only enforcing their acts that they would normally perform in the wild as well.

If elephants are treated like family and only trained through humane tactics why do they not allow fans to watch the training process? This would surely be much more entertaining for viewers than watching elephants stand on one leg. There has to be something circuses are hiding from the public. Ringling Bros. makes a strong case that positive phrases and treats may successfully train some animals like dogs, or cats. Elephants on the other hand are wild animals that are meant to roam up to thirty miles a day and be close with their family of elephants. Some elephants that perform in the circus can weigh up to 7,000 pounds and usually tower over any trainer trying to dominate the animal. When circus handlers attempt to train animals of that immense size solely positive phrases and treats simply just do not cut it. Elephant trainers are constantly being accused of abusing the elephants by bounding their legs with chains and using bullhooks to get the elephants to cooperate. This makes more sense because to get the elephant to follow the routine they must be abused because of their immense size and nature. A website called Humane Review describes the worst case scenario.

The wild animals fare the worst, and elephants top the list in the inherent cruelty that circus animals experience, simply because their size makes transport and housing so confining and unnatural for them. Their training protocols are geared to ensure that the public will never see the underlying abuse, and therefore circus owners remain assured of their wide profit margin after each city stopover.

It is inevitable for circuses to train elephants in harsh ways due to their size, this is the reason that elephants need to be kept out of shows.

Thankfully a former Ringling Bros. employee, Archele Hundley, sees the harm that is being done and speaks out after viewing years of circus trainers mistreating the animals. Hundley teamed up with PETA to make a change when he could not take hearing the agonizing screams from the elephants as they were beaten bloody with bullhooks on a daily basis. He explains to PETA, “I saw handlers deliver a beating … for 30 minutes. She was covered with bloody wounds. I’ll never forget her agonizing screams . . . . Please, never take your children to a Ringling Bros. circus”

Knowing an employee quit his job and felt the need to speak out to put an end to the circus shows just how powerful and cruel these beatings are. These beatings are not just once in a while, or when the animal acts out. The beatings are administered daily from a range of people, “The abuse was not just once in a while—it occurred every day,” says Hundley. “The elephants, horses, and camels were hit, punched, beaten, and whipped by everyone from the head of animal care down to inexperienced animal handlers hired out of homeless shelters.”  These animals do not have a voice and can not stand up for themselves, this is why we must be their voice.

What circus owners do not tell the public is how each individual elephant is “broken” in order to learn each routine. Trainers “positively” use abusive tactics in order to break the elephant. People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals (PETA), an animal activist group, explains this process as, “All four of their legs are tied together so that all they can do for up to 23 hours a day for up to six months is stand on a concrete floor . . . . This is emotionally and physically devastating to a young elephant.” By tying the elephant’s legs together it is preventing the elephant’s natural desire to walk and roam. This is the opposite of the Ringling Bros.’ claim which states that their acts only enforce the elephants natural acts. Also, Ringling Bros. claims that elephants stay with their mothers for the first two years of their life to adjust to the world. AT Humane Review, animal rights activists prove that claim wrong when they expose the heart wrenching process that goes into the birth of a elephant calf. They describe “the very young babies taken from their mothers early so that they can learn the fear of humans and the pain that human handlers can inflict at a very early age, while our species is still able to dominate them.” This is the only way that the circus trainers can implement dominance over the young elephants, and maintain it throughout their lives.

As we begin to realize the cruelty that is placed among these innocent animals we wonder what caused the circus to be this way. There are many obvious causes that explain why elephants are considered a main attraction in circuses, and continue to be to this day. These causes then relay the effects of elephants being beaten brutally in order to remain on top of the circus hierarchy.

For starters, as children we can not wait to go see the elephants because they are beautiful gigantic creatures that naturally entice the us to come see them in the shows. The high demand of the public to see elephants forces the trainers to continuously beat the elephants in order to continue the demand. An advocate for getting elephants out of circuses Matthew Wittmann says, “they’ve been fighting this fight for so long, and for over a century the icon of the American circus was the elephant.” Us going to the circuses and paying the money that we do affects the elephants’ well being because they are being continuously beaten. If we did not have such a high demand to see elephants perform, there would be no need to abuse them.

If we knew the immense cruelty that goes into breaking an elephant, most of us would be shamed away from circuses all together. Today, we are starting to realize the cruelty that is placed upon these beautiful animals and that effects the circus industry. PETA President Ingrid Newkirk commented on the removal of elephants: “These are complex, intelligent animals, and this is a lousy, lousy, dirty, cruel business, and people see that.” The circus and their harmful training tactics ended up hurting themselves because now their main attraction will be gone in just a few short years.

Elephant cruelty has been hidden from the public for as long as circuses have been around. The abuse is inhumane and no animal should be taken out of the wild and beaten to perform for a profit. Now is the time to out the circuses for their wrong doings and for the public to realize what their attendance to these shows is doing to the animals. By Ringling Bros. decision to yank elephants from all circuses by 2018, it shows they are attempting to avoid outrage from the people and possible criminal proceedings. We hope that in the future circuses, without elephants, we are invited to see the real entertainment showcasing the natural beauty of these amazing animals.

Works Cited

Jorgenson, Amy. “Positive Reinforcement & Negative Reinforcement for Dog Training.” Dog Care. Web. 25 Mar. 2015.

Chua-Eoan, Howard. “The Elephants Take A Bow.” Bloomberg Businessweek 1 Mar. 2015. Print.

Jones, Charisse. “Ringling Bros. Eliminating Elephant Acts.” USA Today. Gannett, 5 Mar. 2015. Web. 25 Mar. 2015.

“Animal Care FAQ.” Animal Care FAQ. N.p., 2015. Web. 29 Mar. 2015.

PETA. “Former Ringling Bros. Employee Speaks Out Against Abuse.” PETA. Web. 20 Apr. 2015.

The Circus — A Nightmare for Elephants.” The Circus – A Nightmare For Animals (2012): 1-4. Humane Review. 2012. Web. 28 Mar. 2015.

Pèrez-peña, Richard. “Elephants to Retire From Ringling Brothers Stage.” The New York Times. The New York Times, 5 Mar. 2015. Web. 6 Apr. 2015.

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Research Position Paper

My Researched Opinion

Your first and only long argument is due MIDNIGHT SUN APR 07 before class. The culmination of your research, it will be composed of your three short arguments (Definition/Causal/Rebuttal) and will draw conclusions supported by the evidence you provide.

In its presentation, your final paper it will most likely not make obvious to your readers that it contains a definition essay, a causal essay, and a rebuttal essay. Instead, it will transition from argument to argument seamlessly and perhaps reorganize the material for better continuity.

Your paper will acknowledge that your position is not the only, nor probably the most popular opinion on a topic and that reasonable people hold opinions very different from your own but that nonetheless, yours is the correct position.

ASSIGNMENT SPECIFICS

  • Write your only Research Position Paper.
  • The recommended length is 3000 words, but as always, the word count is a guideline. A strong paper of 2500 words that makes it case well and thoroughly is far superior to a flabby, repetitive 3000-word essay.
  • HOWEVER, a 2500-word essay that does not make a complete argument, or provide sufficient support, or persuade readers of the inevitability of its reasoning is NOT acceptable.
  • WORSE STILL, a 2500-word essay that is wordy, wasteful, and repetitive, and that doesn’t reflect a semester’s worth of research.
  • The paper will make a controversial, counterintuitive argument supported by serious academic research.
  • The essay will include a consideration of common or reasonable counter-arguments and refute them.
  • The citation technique is informal.
  • The paper will include a References section providing bibliographic details for only those works specifically identified in the essay by citation (at least five sources, but however many you actually cite).
  • The Annotated Bibliography is a separate assignment, to be posted next week. It will detail all the sources you have consulted, on the pattern of your Proposal +5, and Proposal +10, but with as many as 15 sources.
  • Call your post Research—Username.
  • But in addition to that placeholder title, also give your essay a proper title. For example, this post is titled “My Researched Opinion.”
  • Publish your definition essay in the Research category, your Username category, and your Portfolio Username category.

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Research Position – juggler

The Justice System
Blames Eyewitness Testimony

The human memory isn’t always reliable, yet the justice system continues to allow prosecutors to rely on the unreliable, why?

Prosecutors are the most powerful figures in the American criminal justice system.  They have authority to investigate persons, grant immunity to witnesses, accused criminals, and plea bargain with defendants. Prosecutors decide what criminal charges to bring when and where a person will answer to those charges. Courts rarely second-guess the decisions of a prosecutor, and all courts presume that a prosecutor has acted appropriately. However, that is not always the case.

Many people end up on death row after being convicted of horrible crimes they did not commit. With the exception of the extremely lucky ones who are exonerated while they are still alive. In 1973 a club was formed called, the “macabre club,” that has over 152-death row inmates whom were exonerated.  Two of the cases below were convicted on faulty eyewitness identification.

Freddie Pitts Florida Conviction: 1963, Pardoned: 1975 (right) Although no physical evidence linked them to the deaths of two white men, Lee and Pitts’ guilty pleas, the testimony of an alleged eyewitness, and incompetent defense counsel led to their convictions. The men were sentenced to death but maintained their innocence. After their convictions, another man confessed to the crime, the eyewitness recanted her accusations, and the state Attorney General admitted that the state had unlawfully suppressed evidence. The men were granted a new trial (Pitts v. State 247 So.2d 53 (Fla. 1971)) but were again convicted and sentenced to death. They were released in 1975 when they received a full pardon from Governor Askew, who stated he was “sufficiently convinced that they were innocent.” (Florida Times-Union, 4/23/98).

Larry Hicks Indiana Conviction: 1978, Acquitted: 1980 Hicks was convicted on two counts of murder and was sentenced to death. Two weeks prior to his scheduled execution, with the help of a volunteer attorney, Hicks received a stay. The Playboy Foundation became interested in this claim of innocence and supplied funds for a reinvestigation after he passed lie detector tests. At retrial, Hicks was acquitted and released after evidence established Hicks’s alibi and showed that eyewitness testimony against him at his original trial was perjured.

Innocent people get convicted for many reasons, false confessions made under duress, bad lawyering, mistaken identifications and the pressure of prosecutors needing to win a case.   With advances in DNA analysis the pace of exonerations has increased, it has also become clear that prosecutorial misconduct is at the heart of an alarming number of these cases.

According to the Innocence Project eyewitness misidentification is the single greatest cause of wrongful conviction nationwide, playing a role in 75% of convictions overturned through DNA testing.  Yet eyewitness testimony is regarded as persuasive evidence by judges and juries.  In about 30% of DNA exoneration cases, innocent defendants made incriminating statements, delivered outright confessions, or pled guilty.  One can make a compelling argument that our legal system falls short on delivering justice. Most people trust what they see with their own eyes above all else. For the same reason they put great weight on eyewitness testimony.   We all point to the legal system, which often convicts people of crimes based largely on an eyewitnesses saying “I was at the scene and I absolutely saw the accused commit the crime.”

The person was there, he or she saw who did it, and unless he or she is a proven liar the case is closed, not the case.  The problem of eyewitness unreliability (and memory unreliability) has been known in academia for years; psychologist have long documented how sincere, honest people make important mistakes when reporting what they saw. But it’s only recently that the legal system has recognized the issues and taken steps to mitigate the problem of eyewitness misidentification.

Eyewitness identification is compelling evidence in all trials. The strength of eyewitness testimony is demonstrated by a study (cited in Loftus and Doyle, 1992) that recorded verdicts in a mock trial. Two separate sets of the jurors heard evidence differing only by the presence or absence of an eyewitness. With no eyewitness, only 18% of jurors gave guilty verdicts. Addition of an eyewitness identification increased the proportion of guilty verdicts to 72%. Even when the identification was impeached, the guilty rate was still 68%.  Several other studies have similarly found that juries tend to base their decision on a confident eyewitness identification even when other factors question its validity.

Eyewitness testimony may be questioned on three scientific grounds. First, visibility conditions may be poor, low light, poor weather.  Secondly, many studies report that even under good visibility, humans are poor at facial identification. Third, the procedures used to obtain the identification may be biased.

The chief justice, Stuart J. Rabner, wrote in a unanimous decision that the legal system had to catch up with scientific evidence in order to ensure justice. Study after study revealed a troubling lack of reliability in eyewitness identifications.   From the review of actual police lineups, laboratory experiments to DNA exonerations, the record proves that the possibility of mistaken identification is real.

In fact, the New Jersey Supreme Court recently issued new rules to prevent innocent people from being wrongly convicted of a crime based upon eyewitness testimony. According to an article in The New York Times,

The New Jersey Supreme Court, acknowledging a “troubling lack of reliability in eyewitness identifications,” issued sweeping new rules… making it easier for defendants to challenge such evidence in criminal cases. The court said that whenever a defendant presents evidence that a witness’s identification of a suspect was influenced, by the police, for instance, a judge must hold a hearing to consider a broad range of issues. These could include police behavior, but also factors like lighting, the time that had elapsed since the crime or whether the victim felt stress at the time of the identification.

Why is mistaken identity so common?  One, the witness is often not told explicitly that a criminal’s picture might not be among the alternatives

There are several consequences of this decision strategy. One is that the witness is highly likely to make a “false alarm,” pick a picture even if the criminal is not in the group, even when unsure. An eyewitness probably starts with the assumption that the criminal must be among the alternatives. Why else would the police bother with the photo spread or line-up? The likelihood of false identification increases when the police put pressure on the witness to make an identification.  Anything which causes a witness to expect that the criminal is present in the group (e. g., police say “we think we have our man”) will increase false alarm rate.

Many studies show that explicitly telling the witness that the criminal may not be in the line-up greatly reduces false identifications while have little effect on correct ones. The result is much higher overall accuracy. The identification examiner should always inform the eyewitness that the criminal might not be present. In fact, the person calling the eyewitness to set up the line-up/photo-identification should also say that the criminal might not be present.

Eyewitness research has repeatedly found that identification is a relative, not an absolute judgment.   The witness does not compare each picture to memory, making a series of independent yes or no decisions. Instead, the eyewitness looks at all the pictures and then picks the one most likely to be the criminal

Secondly, the “stand-ins” are poorly chosen.  Since the eyewitness chooses the “best picture” relative to the others, it is important that the suspect not stand out from the “stand-ins” due to different height, weight, coloring, clothes, behavior, etc. In photo spreads, there are numerous ways that one picture can be subtly different: lighting, color tone, brightness, sharpness, viewing angle, background, location of face in the frame, and so on.  It would be more difficult to re-test a line-up, since the stand-ins may not be available or wearing the same clothes. In addition, there is no guarantee that they will behave the same way as during the identification. It should be remembered, however, that a line-up following a photo-identification is not an independent event. If someone identifies a suspect in the photo spread, the witness will almost certainly identify the same person in the line-up, for consistency’s sake. Who would want to appear a fool by picking a different person from photo and from a live group? The line-up would be, at best, not a comparison of people vs. memory but rather of people vs. previously seen photographs. In fact, eyewitnesses have strong tendency to stay with initial identifications even when they are later proved incorrect. Therefore calling a photo-identification into question automatically raises doubts about any subsequent line-up.

People who constructed the identification procedure will likely say that the stand-ins were similar to the suspect, but they seldom present any objective evidence to support their allegation. The only real way to be sure is to test “inexperience observers,” people not present at the crime with the same alternatives. In a photo spread, for example, inexperienced observers would view the same pictures and then make a choice. In a fair test, they should pick pictures at random, since they cannot use memory to select.   If there is something innately suggestive or distinctive about a suspect’s picture, it may be chosen at a rate above chance. Such a result would seriously question the photo spread’s validity. Attorneys who have any doubts about the fairness of the other stand-ins in a photo spread should have an experimental psychologist design and conduct an unbiased test

Third, the person conducting the photo spread/line-up knew who the suspect was. There are two reasons that neither the person conducting the line-up/photo-identification nor anyone else in the room know who the suspect is. There is a possibility that he/she will intentionally or unintentionally signal this expectation. The signal need not be blatant as even subtle changes in body posture can be enough to tip-off the witness. For example, a slight lean forward while the eyewitness views a picture can be enough to draw a big red circle around it.

A recent study (Wells, et al, 1998) examined the first 40 cases where DNA exonerated wrongfully convicted people. In 90% of the cases, mistaken eyewitness identification played a major role. In one case, 5 separate witnesses identified the defendant.

Huff (1987) studied 500 wrongful convictions and concluded that mistaken eyewitness identification occurred in 60%. This is an amazingly high number since eyewitness identification is an important factor in only 5% of all trials (Loh, 1981).

Cutler and Penrod (1995) examined eyewitness identification accuracy from controlled studies performed in “natural settings.” In the typical study, a person enters a convenience store and performs some memorable action (such as paying in change) to ensure drawing the clerk’s attention. Later the clerk views a photo spread and identifies the “customer.” The percentage of correct identification ranged from 34-48% and the percentage of false identification is 34-38%. It is hard to know how far to generalize such studies, but they suggest that eyewitnesses are almost as likely to wrong as to be correct when identifying strangers. These results occurred until highly favorable circumstances: extended duration, good lighting, clear visibility, and no “weapons focus.”

The tendency to signal expectations is so pervasive that drug and other important scientific studies are rejected without a “double-blind” procedure, one where neither the subject nor the experimenter knows the expected outcome. Similarly, courts now generally require that surveys conducted to support litigation in intellectual property cases be performed by questioners who have no knowledge of the desired outcome or even of the issues in dispute. It is ironic that criminal courts, where there can be much more at stake, freely permit introduction of such potentially biased evidence as identifications conducted without double-blind procedures.

There is a corollary to the necessity of double-blind procedures: the witness must be told that the examiner has no idea who the suspect is. Otherwise, the eyewitness might look for a sign of confirmation, real or imagined. Some personality types constantly seek approval from authority figures, such as the police. They are likely to seek affirmation in feedback from the examiner.

The examiner can easily influence witness confidence after the choice. If the examiner says “good” or “um hmm,” after the choice, the eyewitness will feel more confident and likely later express a stronger belief in his/her accuracy. This can be crucial because juries look at not just the identification, but also at the witness’s certainty. In fact, one study found that witness confidence is about the only aspect of an identification that jurors consider (Cutler, et al, 1990). This is probably one of the reasons the correlation between eyewitness confidence and accuracy is low (Bothwell, et. al, 1987)

Although eyewitness identification is highly fallible, it still carries great weight with jurors. There are some situations where identification is more likely accurate. For example, if the suspect is someone previously known to the victim, then high accuracy is more probable. When it comes to strangers, however, identifications are frequently in error.

Why is it the more we remember an event the less reliable the recollection is? Memory tends to distort perception in systematic ways. For example, people tend to remember colors as being brighter and more saturated than they actually were. Other studies show that people who are asked to recall vehicle speeds tend to overestimate slow speeds and to underestimate fast ones. Additional studies show systematic biases in remembering distance and size.

Human memory does not exist so that an observer may accurately report previously seen events. The actual, physical events are merely interpretation. Each witness extracts an interpretation that is meaningful in terms of his own beliefs, experiences and needs. Once the interpretation occurs, the events themselves become relatively unimportant. Since each person interprets events in terms of his/her own world view, different eyewitnesses observing the same event may have different interpretations and different memories.

Eyewitness memories can be biased by the questions asked at the time of retrieval. Several famous studies have shown that the question can supply information that the eyewitness will incorporate into the answer. The question can easily supply information that helps fill in gaps in the respondent’s memory.

Memory Changes over time and with retelling. Eyewitnesses incorporate information learned after the event into memory. For example, they may talk to another witness and use information from the conversation to fill in their reconstruction of the events. They may do this by combining two memories into one or by using bias or expectations of what probably was seen.

As people recall an event over and over, they drop details from earlier versions and add new details to later versions. All things being equal, accuracy declines with each new version, at least until an asymptote is reached. In some cases, however, an eyewitness accuracy is lower when questioned immediately after a traumatic event.

Our justice system is clearly aware that eyewitness testimony is unreliable.  There is no doubt that if we modernize the techniques to enhance eyewitness testimony less innocent people will be convicted of crimes they did not commit.

On May 21, the University of Michigan Law School, in conjunction with the Center on Wrongful Convictions at the Northwestern University School of Law, released the first-ever National Registry of Exonerations. The searchable online database is the most credible and comprehensive resource on wrongful convictions in the United States. Peter Neufeld, the co-founder and co-director of the Innocence Project, has called it the “Wikipedia of Innocence.” The registry, which can be viewed at exonerationregistry.org, currently counts 891 cases since 1989, the year of the first exoneration achieved using DNA

  • Crimes: 45% falsely convicted of homicide; 29% of sexual assault (includes 11% convicted of child sex abuse); 13% of other violent crimes; 14% of non-violent crimes.
  • DNA: 25% were exonerated at least in part by DNA evidence; 75% without DNA evidence.
  • Time served: All told, these exonerees spent nearly 14,429 years in prison–on average 9 years each. Almost all were imprisoned for years; 40% for 10 years or more; 61% for at least 5 years.
  • The rate of Perjury or False Accusations is highest in child sex abuse cases (80%) and homicide cases (67%).
  • The rate of Official Misconduct is highest in homicide cases (60%) and child sex abuse (44%).
  • The rate of Mistaken Identifications is highest in adult sexual assault cases (72%).
  • The rate of False or Misleading Forensic Evidence is highest in adult sexual assault cases (32%) and child sex abuse cases (23%).
  • The rate of False Confessions is highest in homicide cases (21%)

Enhancing new techniques to increase the reliability of eyewitness testimony is supported by the data provided by the exonerationregistry.org   It’s not an option to continue to ignore the studies, statics, and the fact that innocent people continue to get convicted of crimes they did not commit.  A paradigm shift is needed in our justice system to assist eyewitness testimony.  As we all know the human memory  will never be 100% accurate until we master the memory, and that’s  not going to happen in anyone’s life time.    I believe the  justice system will do their due diligence to overcome the flaws with eyewitness testimony.  If not, the justice system will continue to blame the eyewitnesses for sending the innocent to prison.

Work Cited

“The National Registry of Exonerations – Exoneration Registry.” The National Registry of Exonerations – Exoneration Registry. N.p., n.d. Web. 04 May 2015. National Registry of Exonerations

“Visual Expert Human Factors: Errors in Eyewitness Identification Procedures.” Visual Expert Human Factors: Errors in Eyewitness Identification Procedures. N.p., n.d. Web. 28 Apr. 2015.

152 Innocents, Marked for Death.” The New York Times. The New York Times, 12 Apr. 2015. Web. 19 Apr. 2015.

“How Many Innocent People Have We Sent To Prison?” How Many Innocent People Have We Sent To Prison? N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Apr. 2015.

“Eyewitness Misidentification.” – The Innocence Project. N.p., n.d. Web. 09 Mar. 2015.

Hartnett, Kevin. “How to Make Eyewitness Evidence More Reliable – The Boston Globe.” BostonGlobe.com. N.p., 27 Feb. 2015. Web. 28 Feb. 2015.

“Memory Encoding – Memory Processes – The Human Memory.” Memory Encoding – Memory Processes – The Human Memory. N.p., n.d. Web. 26 Apr. 2015.  

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Research Position – Moneytrees4

Multivitamins – Useful or Harmful?

A multivitamin is a supplement that contains multiple vitamins. They are believed to be beneficial to ones health. There are many new researches popping up that apparently show multivitamins are “useless”. With no significant health benefits to speak of, people blindly take these supplements everyday, year after year. One research showed that they did nothing for heart health, another found that they did nothing to mitigate or prevent cognitive decline, and another showed they did not decrease the chances of an early death. These studies were all done not too far apart from each in as far as time goes. Studies also show that a third of American adults take a multivitamin on a daily basis.

The reason researchers and nutritionists are finding these multivitamins useless is because they say we get all of the nutrients and vitamins we need from the foods we eat. Granted these days there are much less healthy, less fortified foods available, the foods we cook and eat at the dinner table provide all the nutrients we need according to researchers. Therefore, they feel that any extra from a supplement would result in an excess amount. Now there is an entire different situation when you can actually be harmed from something that is suppose to be helping you. Studies show that men who took high doses of vitamin E had higher risk to have prostate cancer. Another study from the Iowa Study showed that Iron could be harmful to pregnant woman.

But what could bring about such an oversight? Wouldn’t the companies that produce these products know that they are not effective if they are in fact useless? The companies that produce these supplements are well aware of what they can and can not do. They know that their products yield no significant results. These vitamins are not cheap either. You can easily end up paying 50 dollars or more for just a few bottles. Separate studies in 2009 and 2011 indicate that multivitamins have no positive effects on an individual’s health. With that said, we can see how people can end up wasting hundreds maybe even thousands of dollars a year. A given company can make millions perhaps even in the billions every year for continuing what they do. Collectively, the public spends about $28 billion a year on vitamins. Obviously, they would not stop putting this stuff into the public when they are making this kind of money from it. It is not an oversight, it is carelessness perhaps even evil. A study posted in New England Journal of Medicine in 1994 showed that I large amount of Vitamin A with carotene can increase the risk for lung cancer.

These days, people are lazy. They want to be able to live how they want and not deal with any consequences as well. Many people for this very eat foods that are not very healthy and beneficial and try to fill in the nutrient “gaps” with multivitamins. Maintaining your health is more important than your favorite foods. It takes mostly exercise and a healthy diet. However, society is becoming more fast paced so things are getting “sloppy”. Much of the earths air is polluted, food is made cheap, fast, and therefore with chemicals harmful to the human body. These foods also lack the vitamins and nutrients that naturally come with it in a natural form. Companies knowing this continue to put these supplements into the public As I said before they do it for the money because they are not around the damage it can cause. Not even the FDA, the organization that is supposed to monitor the food forces these companies to stop[ putting out useless and sometimes harmful product.

Taking vitamins has become an everyday thing for a lot of people. When you believe these supplements help, it is easy to get into a cycle of waking up popping two or three pills along with your breakfast and coffee. Numbers show that fifty percent of the american population takes multivitamins on a regular basis. Older, wealthier people are more likely to take vitamins. Vitamin use also raises with education. People also continue to take multivitamins due to force of habit. Others do not know that they are ineffective. The placebo effect can also come into play when you everyone says this supplement helps them and you want it to help you.

Of course you can get all of the vitamins and minerals you need from the good fortified foods. Foods including, leafy greens, broccoli, spinach, salads, etc. The article “Interaction and Warnings” tells us specific functions of some vitamins. Natural food has vitamins such as Vitamin C, Vitamin, E, Vitamin A, etc. They help the body carry out its regular functions and work properly. Without getting a proper balance of vitamins and minerals, a person could p[possibly develop a deficiency of some sort. At that point you would have to seek medical attention. Vitamin A is important for growth and helps the immune system. Vitamin E can be good for the heart and blood vessels but dangerous in large amount like many other fat soluble vitamins.

There are two kinds of vitamins. According to “Medicine.net”, fat soluble vitamins and water-soluble vitamins. Water soluble vitamins are stored in the kidneys and urinated out in excess. Fat soluble vitamins are stored in many organs and can cause much harm in excess. Both of these kinds of vitamins are needed but in excess they are urinated out or just a waste of money. Also, as I previously stated, they can cause harm to the body.

If we get all of the vitamins we need from the foods we eat, any supplements is a waste of money and could possibly cause health problems. Its possible in the near future these companies begin making their product cheaper to make even more money and this can cause more health problem. So if you have more people getting sick and the same or many even more people regularly taking the vitamins, this nation is in bad shape. With this in mind, the useless product should be banned and not allowed to be sold. There are other options for increasing ones health. I wonder if it would even be worth trying to get all these people to stop taking multivitamins.

All this evidence and research is hard to deny to say the least. Hopefully this research will cause people to stop investing in such a product. This will only give these companies more money, more power and they will continue to produce the same or even worse products. There are however experts that say multivitamins are effective and worth the money they cost. It is possible that these experts have not seen or done proper research or perhaps they are working with or for the companies that produce the multivitamins. Author Kathleen Zelman is a person who believes multivitamins are beneficial to fill in the nutrition “gaps” so many people have. Her view is just one of many.

Works Cited

“Diet and Nutrition Tips for Healthy Eating, Diets.” MedicineNet. N.p., n.d. Web. 27 Apr. 2015.

Oz, Mehmet. “Taking Too Many Vitamins Can Be Dangerous – Excess Supplements – Dr. Oz – AARP.” AARP. N.p., n.d. Web. 27 Apr. 2015.

Swift, Art. “Half of Americans Take Vitamins Regularly.” Half of Americans Take Vitamins Regularly. N.p., n.d. Web. 27 Apr. 2015.

“Vitamin E: Uses, Side Effects, Interactions and Warnings – WebMD.”WebMD. WebMD, n.d. Web. 27 Apr. 2015.

“Water Soluble Vitamins vs Fat Soluble Vitamins.” MedicineNet. N.p., n.d. Web. 27 Apr. 2015.

Zelman, Kathleen. “How to Choose a Multivitamin Supplement.” WebMD. WebMD, n.d. Web. 28 Apr. 2015.

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Rebuttal Rewrite–qdoba

“The Marshmallow Test Causes Lasting Effects”

The Marshmallow Test was a study of nursery children to see if they had the ability to challenge their temptations. A marshmallow was put in front of them on a plate and the child had two options-to either wait fifteen minutes and receive another, or to eat the marshmallow right away. Many children have a difficult time restraining their needs, and not realizing what the consequences might be in the future. Children, especially nursery aged, do not know or realize that they have or can have willpower. Some might have it without realizing. For example, if a child does wait those fifteen minutes to receive another marshmallow, they are resisting their temptations no matter how hard it is. This test is an experiment of self-control and the remarkable long-term outcomes of the data that was recorded and observed.

Willpower is to have control of one’s impulses and actions; self-control. However, willpower is also “the ability to resist short-term temptations in order to meet long-term goals.” In this case, children who were able to resist eating the first marshmallow grew up into teenagers who received higher SAT scores and were seen as having the ability to better stay in relationships than the children who ate the marshmallow in the first thirty seconds. The man behind this 1960’s experiment goes by the name of Dr. Walter Mischel, who in fact noticed that the children who were able to wait for the second marshmallow displayed creative ways of distracting themselves. The distractive behaviors suggest that the children with greater willpower have a higher sense of creativity. The results were incredible; the preschoolers who were able to control their temptations have a lower BMI, lower rates of addiction, a lower divorce rate and were able to conquer stress in their future. However, Mischel does not lose any faith in the preschoolers who immediately ate the first marshmallow saying, “I have no doubt that self-control skills … are imminently teachable.”

For instance, “If you’re a smoker and as you approach the cigarette you’re thinking lung cancer … and imagining it very vividly, your picture of your lung with a black spot and your physician telling you ‘I’m so sorry to have to tell you etc.’ that visualization can be very powerful,” said Mischel. Mischel believes that techniques of self-control can be taught and learned at any age. But the question is why can some people resist their temptation, while others cannot? Suppose an individual needed to make some fast money and had two options in mind, having a healthy and steady job and having the salary $8 an hour or seeking out a secretive “spot” to help drug addicts fight their withdrawal symptoms making $1000 a day. The natural human instinct is to make the most money in a short amount of time, but what people do not realize in their moment of decision, is their long-term goals in contrast to short-term temptations.

For children to recognize this concept and understand how they can apply it to their everyday decisions can have a major impact on their lives and shapes them as individuals. According to Marina Chaparro, RD, one of the best things about willpower is that growing self-control in one areas of your life leads to other positive changes. Willpower changes the way people think. For instance, going to the gym may lead to eating healthier. Willpower is not innate, however it is similar to a muscle in a body where it can be strengthen over time. Yet, unlike muscles, willpower can be affected by emotions. If the child had a tough day, he/she might just eat the first marshmallow to make his or her day seem a bit better. Short-term temptations are diseases, cravings, thoughts that are turned into actions without rethinking about what the outcomes might be.

The Marshmallow Test is in fact a study testing children’s’ willpower and their self-control. Willpower has many factors including the child’s parents, the environment they grew up around, and if they have the ability to trust. Waking up everyday to the same surroundings shapes the way people think and act, and the people show them who to trust and who to look past. Growing up in an environment where children only know that the norm of their society is to have things and items taken away from them will cause them to grow up with having extremely low expectations and little to no trust in anyone around them.

Works Cited

Dictionary.com. Dictionary.com, n.d. Web. 01 Mar. 2015. <http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/willpower&gt;.

Manning, Joy. “Willpower: How You Can Get More of It and Why It Runs Out.” WebMD. WebMD, 29 July 2014. Web. 01 Mar. 2015. <http://www.webmd.com/diet/willpower-facts?page=1&gt;.

“Delaying Gratification.” Science 306.5695 (2004): 369l. American Psychological Association. Web. 1 Mar. 2015. <https://www.apa.org/helpcenter/willpower-gratification.pdf&gt;.

Hadad, Chuck. “What ‘marshmallow Test’ Can Teach You about Your Kids – CNN.com.” CNN. Cable News Network, 22 Dec. 2014. Web. 23 Apr. 2015. <http://www.cnn.com/2014/12/22/us/marshmallow-test/&gt;.

 

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Agenda WED APR 22

  • Open My Notes
  • Course Evaluation from Banner
  • Indoor Picnic
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Agenda MON APR 20

  • Open My Notes
  • Please Note: The adjective for Cause is Causal, not Casual.
  • Categorize your Rebuttal or Causal Rewrite in the A10 Category.
  • If you haven’t yet posted a Rebuttal Rewrite or a Causal Rewrite, click through to the assignment and refresh your understanding of the specifications.
  • Exercise Punch That Title
  • Exercise Help that Hurts
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Punch that Title

Titles that start the argument

Imagine if the show had been called The Thing Most People Don’t Know About Buffy. She seems to be a normal, awkward high school girl, but after classes she’s up most of the night slaying vampires.

Question: Shouldn’t we tell our readers that one fact about her, if we can, before they decide to spend their time somewhere else?

Answer: Yes, we should.

To what degree do the following titles achieve the clarity and impact of Buffy the Vampire Slayer?

  • Let’s Make It Harder to Shop By Having Too Many Options to Choose From
  • Needs a Title
  • Macronutrient Management
  • Child Euthanasia Will Not Increase Child Deaths
  • Needs a Title
  • The Protein Supplement War
  • Spectators Cause Elephant Cruelty due to the Thrill of the Show
  • Needs a Title
  • How Health Care Affects Prescription Statistics
  • 28 Billion Dollars Worth of Lies
  • Happiness Cannot be Found
  • Suicide Ride—Switching the Railway
  • PTSD Brings the Battlefield Home
  • Choose the Right Door: Understanding the Monty Hall Problem
  • Should I even want to be happy?
  • How to Live Forever . . . or Longer
  • Needs a Title

Can we improve just one?

Suppose instead of that informative but longish explanation about the cause and effect relationship between the spectators at the circus and the treatment of the elephant performers, we titled our article:

  • The Cruelty of Watching

I think that might sufficiently intrigue readers to make them read the first sentence. Once they start, the job of the first sentence will be . . . . (say it all together, please):

Get them to read the second sentence

Which one does a better job?

Version 1. One of an American’s favorite pastimes is taking the family out to one of the most spectacular shows on earth, the circus.

Version 2. Elephants wouldn’t be slaughtered for their tusks if the Chinese didn’t buy tons of ivory.

Which is the better second sentence?

Version 1. One of the most popular acts of the circus is when the large elephants, completely obedient and organized, dance and even balance on one foot raising their two front feet in the air.

Version 2. And the same gentle beasts wouldn’t be starved, or disciplined with cattle prods, if we didn’t pay money to see them dance in tutus.

EXERCISE 1.

  1. Visit the Causal Argument or Rebuttal Argument post of any one classmate (or more if you like).
  2. Read the argument carefully to understand its most potent and provocative claim.
  3. In the Reply field, offer a title (or if there is one already, a substitute title) and the first sentence of a revised first paragraph. (Or the first two or three sentences if your revision requires slightly more words.)

EXERCISE 2.

  1. First complete Exercise 1.
  2. Then return to this post and rewrite as many popular culture titles as you like (Movies, TV shows, Books, music CDs) in the Reply field, one title per Reply.
  3. If the original title is horrible, improve it.
  4. If the original title is already genius, suckify it.
  5. Provide only the rewritten titles.
  6. Invite your classmates to guess the originals.
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Help that Hurts

Kindness Kills

Tonight, I’m asking you to do the hard thing: criticize a fellow writer who has made an effort to persuade us of a truth. Last week you were permitted to both praise and critique, but we’ve run out of time for nurturing one another. Tonight, you can only find faults.

It’s Not You, It’s Me

In doing so, I mean to liberate you from your compulsion to be kind and empathetic. with a week to go before the deadline to publish research papers, we need to fix  problems without delay.

Thank you, Authors

For the most part, the authors represented here are ahead of the game. They published Rewrites on time. Those of you whose work does not appear here are even further behind. Instead of being relieved that you escaped being criticized below, you should probably be disappointed that you’ll miss out on the critiques of several careful readers.

Euthanasia

The paragraph in blue below is the bulk of the author’s Causal Argument about Euthanasia.

  1. Can you tell what the Author is trying to prove (single effect with many causes? single cause with many effects?)? If so, explain what the Author is trying to prove.
  2. In what way(s) does the Author fail to make a persuasive Cause/Effect case?
  3. What causes or effects have been omitted or neglected?
  4. Imagine you’re a member of a jury deciding whether euthanasia should be legal based on the arguments here. In what ways does the evidence and reasoning fall short of convincing you?
  5. Correct the grammar if you can, particularly the runon sentences (and comma splices).

The desire of euthanasia can be the effect of years of dealing with the constant pain that certain terminal diseases can cause a patient. The argument is made that with enough medicine, there is no such thing as “unbearable pain”, that with enough pain killers, the patient won’t feel a thing. Not only does this method of dealing with the pain become very expensive, it can create a loss of dignity. First, constant sedation of a patient becomes very costly.  Whether the patient has insurance or paying out of packet, it is going to cost someone a lot of unnecessary money. Second, when a patient is being kept alive by heavy doses of medicine, they lose their sense of independence. The patient becomes confined to a hospital bed, their only outside contact is those who come to visit them. They can begin to feel like a burden to their loved ones, knowing that, even though it sounds terrible, their death would ease a large amount of stress from their families shoulders. All of these struggles causes the patient to want their lives to come to an end.

Forgetting Childbirth

The paragraph in blue below is the bulk of the author’s Causal Argument about the Benefit of Forgetfulness.

  1. Does it make sense that suppresses painful memories for our benefit? A woman who forgets the pain of childbirth might be more likely to have another child. But a man who forgets the pain of third degree burns might be more likely to play with gasoline and matches.
  2. Does it help or hurt the Author’s argument to ignore pleasant memories?
  3. As you know, claiming that an Author shows “insufficient evidence” is not an effective rebuttal, but can you offer any small evidence of your own that would refute this paragraph?

If you were to ask a woman what child birth felt like, she might describe the experience as the most painful experience of her life. The soreness after birth, may remind a woman of the pain she went through during her time in labor. However, as time goes by and soreness fades, the memories of a painful childbirth begin to be forgotten. Therefore, a woman may want more children afterwards. If a woman was able to remember every moment of childbirth and the intense pain associated with the process, she may not want to go through the experience of a tough labor again with another child. A year after giving birth, the woman may describe the experience as “not so bad,” where weeks after the birth, she described the experience as “the most painful experience of her life.”  If we weren’t able to forget painful memories, we wouldn’t be as willing to experience memories again that may end painfully. Our memory shields us from everlasting unpleasant feelings by fading away details of an event.

Free Heroin

The paragraph in blue below is the bulk of the author’s Causal Argument about Free Heroin for Vancouver’s Addicts.

  1. Does the Author make a Causal Argument or something else? If a Causal Argument, critique the causes and effects. If something else, describe the failure to concentrate on causation.
  2. What is the most persuasive evidence? How well does it persuade?
  3. The Author appears to object to the program. Is the rationale for that objection apparent?

Normally when clinics offer treatment for heroin addicts they try to get them to stop using and become clean. A person couldn’t possibly be treated if they were still using, it would defeat the whole purpose of the treatment. Vancouver thinks the complete opposite. Clinics in Vancouver offer heroin addicts free heroin. The clinics claim that by giving them heroin they are keeping them off the street and keep them from getting bad drugs or AIDS.  The addicts have a choice whether to go to a detox center or not, if not they can get free heroin for life. They are just sustain their addiction.

Desperate Housewives

The paragraph in blue below is the heart of the author’s Causal Argument about The Pursuit of Happiness.

  1. The Author is making a Causal Argument. Are we clear what the terms of the cause(s) and effect(s) are?
  2. How well does the Real Housewives example illustrate one half of the comparison between superficiality and meaning?
  3. Would the Housewives of Atlanta agree with their characterization here? Does it matter that they might not recognize their superficiality?

Superficial aspect result in despair. Desperation is not a good way to live ones life. When someone yearns for something they can not receive or will not receive this is portrayed as desperation. As stated in previous papers the Real Housewives of Atlanta are a perfect example of showing women who yearn for unnecessary, materialistic items to try to gain happiness.Their superficial pursuit results in a race for who can have the most and who can gain it the quickest.The cause in this demonstration, to gain “happiness” through the newest and best objects money can buy. The effect is a life that is unfulfilling due to the constant disappointment that maybe the best of everything is unattainable.

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