Category Archives: Regrade Please

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Robusts Verbs -breakingbad45

Original : There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a … Continue reading

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Causal Rewrite – Toetio

Gestures in The Hands of Interpreters While the use of hand gestures as a substitute for verbal language in the case of a language barrier is indisputable and well documented one might assume that hand gestures are only necessary in … Continue reading

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Rebuttal rewrite – Toetio

The Complicated Origins of Hand Gestures Some people may argue against the idea that hand gestures are used to communicate over a language barrier, on the basis that hand gestures are culture specific. as a result of this, people from … Continue reading

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Visual Rewrite – Toetio

Marcus :30 | Rural Mental Health Marcus :30 | Rural Mental Health (youtube.com) 0:00 The video starts with an african american man wearing a yellow shirt and dark blue jeans standing in front of a fence, behind the fence is … Continue reading

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