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PTSD Claims- Coffeelover03
I had Section 19: “ A 2000 VA budget crunch led to her clinic’s contract being terminated—and her husband’s disability pay ended when he killed himself in 2001.” This is a casual claim. This is showing the cause of Dannas … Continue reading
Posted in Claims, CoffeeLover
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Casual Argument- Coffeelover03
Technology and Its Causes Ever wondered why technology evolved over time? I always did. I always wondered who was the cause behind this idea. Technology over time did increase in its ways. Ways that we never knew technology would evolve. … Continue reading
Posted in CoffeeLover
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Visual Rewrite — Holistic25
(0-1 seconds)The video starts out in an aesthetically pleasing setting, presumably in the woods. There are lovely trees that stand like skyscrapers in comparison to the deck shown, as well as the two houses in the background. Slightly barren yet … Continue reading
Posted in Holistic, Portfolio—Holistic, Visual Rewrite
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Visual Rewrite— Ilovebees
Child Car Safety 0.01 The video shows a family composed of the mother, the father, a girl of approximately 6 years old who is holding her father’s hand, and a boy of approximately 3 years old who is carried by … Continue reading
Posted in ILoveBees, Portfolio—ILoveBees, Visual Rewrite
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Visual Rewrite – Toetio
Marcus :30 | Rural Mental Health Marcus :30 | Rural Mental Health (youtube.com) 0:00 The video starts with an african american man wearing a yellow shirt and dark blue jeans standing in front of a fence, behind the fence is … Continue reading
Posted in Portfolio—Toetio, Regrade Please, Toetio, Visual Rewrite
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Visual Rewrite – Ilovemydog
0:00-0:01- During the first second of the video, before any action actually begins, I can see a stuffed ferret on a branch next to a lamp. The wood panels on the house tell me it may be an older model … Continue reading
Posted in ILoveMyDog, Portfolio—ILoveMyDog, Visual Rewrite
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Visual Rewrite—Snowman
0:00 – The video starts with a close-up of a leg, dressed in grey pants and green socks, on a wooden floor. It suggests someone is engaged in some form of activity, though the specifics are not immediately clear. Further … Continue reading
Posted in Portfolio—Snowman, Snowman, Visual Rewrite
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Visual Rewrite-ravensfan
0:01: The ad starts with an old fashion cartoon. The cartoon has washed colors to it. There are not a ton of rich and bright colors. The cartoon shows a middle aged man conducting a train that is carrying wood. … Continue reading
Posted in Portfolio—RavensFan, RavensFan, Visual Rewrite
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Visual Rewrite- HockeyFan
0:00-0:01- What looks like a Man and a Women in a relationship are standing in some kind of field. Looks like it could possibly be a farm. The couple looks seemingly happy as they are standing next to each other … Continue reading
Posted in HockeyFan, Portfolio—HockeyFan, Visual Rewrite
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Visual Rewrite- Username
0.01: This ad starts in action in regards to the people sitting at the table, with the camera being still at the same place. This scene starts in the middle of the scene, showing us exactly what the people are … Continue reading
Posted in Portfolio—Username, Username, Visual Rewrite
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