Category Archives: Author

Visual Rewrite – ExcellentStudent

Posted on April 2, 2024 by excellentstudent27

0:00-0:03. Right off the bat we are greeted with a crowded bar, there are two men socializing, both with drinks in their hands. We can assume they are intoxicated, given the large smiles and the authors choice of setting. It … Continue reading →

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Robust Verbs- NatureChild

Posted on April 2, 2024 by Naturechild101

Vancouver faces turmoil with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. In an attempt to combat the issue, The “free heroin for addicts” program was established in hopes for addicts to get off the streets and a decrease in … Continue reading →

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Robust Verbs- Username

Posted on April 2, 2024 by username1132005

Vancouver is facing huge problems with a rising problem of heroin addicts creating an unsafe community by committing crimes in order to support their habits. In order to try and combat this rising issue, there has been a program created … Continue reading →

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Robust Verb — Ilovebees

Posted on April 2, 2024 by ilovebeesss

Vancouver faces a significant problem with heroin addicts committing crimes to fuel their habits, leading to the creation of a “free heroin for addicts” program aimed at addressing this issue. However, the program faces challenges such as making addicts maintain … Continue reading →

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Robust verbs – temporal

Posted on April 1, 2024 by temporal111

A huge problem in Vancouver is heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the large crime rate due to the addicts. Day to day activities become increasingly … Continue reading →

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Robust Verbs — Holistic 25

Posted on April 1, 2024 by holistic25

The overarching problem of heroin addicts in Vancouver is the crimes they commit to support their habits. To address the crime rate, the program named “free heroin for addicts” has been created to mitigate heroin addicts from acting on their … Continue reading →

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Robust verbs- thatpersonoverthere

Posted on April 1, 2024 by thatpersonoverthere

In Vancouver heroin addicts are committing crimes to get their fix. They’ll do anything to drive the high heroin gives them, even resorting to petty theft. This causes a the addicts to underperform in their daily lives. Their jobs and … Continue reading →

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PTSD- breakingbad45

Posted on March 31, 2024 by BreakingBad45

This is a factual claim because it is discussing a factual thing thatches happened and is proven by the date 2. “Brannan is cautiously optimistic but ready for anything on Lasagna Night.“ This is a hypothetical claim because it says … Continue reading →

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Visual Rewrite – breakingbad45

Posted on March 31, 2024 by BreakingBad45

0.01-0.08 The music begins to start in what seems to be somewhat of an orchestral sound to the commercial. You can see in the beginning of the shot you can see the hands off an older woman. You can tell … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite– NatureChild

Posted on March 27, 2024 by Naturechild101

A slight change in the sun’s position could causethe Earth to become Uninhabitable for all life. The sun’s importance has been ingrained in minds since the dawn of time, leaving the collective understanding that the sun was essentially the “provider … Continue reading →

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