GOAL 1: I used a multi-stage, recursive, and social process for my writing and took into consideration feedback from my instructor, classmates, and other readers. Throughout this class I realize I have not issued many rewrites, however, I have gone through papers and revised them as well as helped others. I did not realize how necessary revisions were until I started having people read my papers. I was very stubborn about people reading my papers, not embarrassed, but I liked keeping them to myself and the professor. This class helped me embrace that other people could see my papers. Before this class I was in the habit proof-reading papers only by myself and not letting anyone else read the for revision. I now have understanding of how important it is to get help from others and I also feel comfortable with it. One of my rewrites was from the beginning of the semester. Having others revise it gave me a better grasp on the assignment and why there are revisions. Here is my Visual Rhetoric Rewrite.
GOAL 2: I read source materials closely and analyzed them critically to learn how and why texts create meaning. All the sources that I used for my research position paper took some time to gather. I read a lot of things that I did not read as well as a lot of things that distracted me because I was so interested by them. Some of them were just used for statistics and facts, however, I analyzed the statistics and after a lot of critical thinking ad practice, I was able to formulate arguments. This is most clearly seen in my Research Paper. A big part of this was finding things such as crime rates and expenses due to heroin addicts. Using this I was able to argue how things were improved.
GOAL 3: I wrote with a particular audience in mind, allowing my purpose to shape the language and methods I used not just to communicate information but to persuade readers. I think that the blog for this class was very effective. I did not want to put anything embarrassing up so before I posted I made sure I was proud of it. I’m very shy in my work normally. In my arguments I was always focused on the audience that would be against my proposal and thought that everything could have an argument. I believe the personal experiences of people spoke the most to me and therefore utilized that in my papers. For example, my Rebuttal Argument used a quote from someone who quit heroin due to a clinic. I felt this was one of the most persuasive things that could be used.
GOAL 4: I demonstrated my information literacy by synthesizing my own experience with new insights and information from a range of outside sources to produce new material. In doing research for my main counterintuitive argument, I was enlightened to how a free heroin clinic can actually help people. About a week after choosing my topic, I changed my whole argument and was then arguing for the side I was originally against. This helped me realize that I always need to keep my mind open. I know I did not mention many personal experiences in my essays but I understand that I have a lot of work to do to be a great writer and this is just something else I need to learn to do.
GOAL 5: My writing is ethical. Writing about meaningful topics, I have engaged responsibly with them and represented my ideas and the ideas of others honestly, fairly, and logically. If I did anything right this semester, it was getting my opinion across in my paper for a good cause. I think my topic was meaningful and can really help people that have made mistakes in their lives. I think everyone should have a second chance, just because someone made a mistake to do heroin, does not mean it should haunt them for life. In my research paper I believe my ideas were well thought out and logical. I did my best to not make any of my work fallacy and all of my arguments are honest and valid.